Mortal Kombat!!!

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  1. The Elite LC

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    "name": MK
    "author": [
    The Elite LC
    [OG]JokerKing
    Paradoxial
    ]
    "summary": Battle it out between, Earthrealm, Netherrealm, Outworld, and The Lin Kuei! Who will remain victorious? Better watch out! With powerful beings like Shao Kahn, who will OBLITERATRE anyone with his hammer, and Quan Chi, who can mummify you in a trance. Who will prevail? Round 1, FIGHT!

    {
    "side": "Village",
    "translation": "Earthrealm",
    "Winmsg": "The Earthrealm has bested all foes. They are the most powerful realm. It's their turn for take over."
    },
    {
    "side": "Outworld"
    "translation": "Outworld",
    "winmsg": "Outworld has taken over ALL REALMS! Who will stop them now?"
    },
    {
    "side": "Lin Kuei",
    "translation": "Lin Kuei",
    "winmsg": "The Lin Kuei have prevailed! The question now is... who will be the new grandmaster?"
    },
    {
    "Side": "Netherrealm"
    "translation": "Netherrealm"
    "winmsg": "The Netherrealm has turned ALL REALMS into hell. Talk about dominance."
    }
    {
    "Role": Day Killer,
    "Translation": "Liu Kang",
    "Side" "Earthrealm",
    "help": "You are Liu Kang. Your powerful kicks give you a day kill. But you're role is revealed 60% of the time. Be careful if Shao Kahn is in.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "Kill": {
    "Target": "anybutself",
    "Msg": Remember the 60%. Now KILL!",
    "killmsg": "Liu Kang hit ~Target~ with a bicycle kick... they didn't survive.",
    "Revealchance": 0.6,
    "Revealmsg" " ~self~ (Liu Kang) was revealed during the attack!"
    }
    }
    }

    "Actions": {
    "Night": {
    "Protect": {
    "Target": "AnyButSelf.
    "Common": "role",
    "Priority": 10
    "Broadcast": "role"
    }
    },
    "Startup": "role-reveal"
    }

    "Actions": {
    " Night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "self",
    "Priority": 11,
    "Distractmsg": "You were kissed by Sonya. She then kicked your face in. You weren't able to do anything. ",
    }
    }
    }

    "Safeguard": {
    "Target": "anybutself",
    "Common": "self",
    "Priority": 11,
    "Broadcast": "none"
    },
    "Actions": {
    "Night": {
    "Crush": {
    "Target": "AnyButTeam",
    "Common": "Team",
    "Priority": 15,
    "Command": "kill",
    "Broadcast": "Self",
    "Msg": "Jax crushed you with his robotic arms. Your head is now a pancake. Mmm... delicious. "
    }


    {
    "Role": "consp"
    "Translation": "Smoke",
    "Side": "Lin Kuei",
    "winningSides": ["Earthrealm"],
    ...
    }

    {
    "Role": Consp
    "Translation": "Cyrax",
    "Side": "Lin Kuei",
    "winningSides": ["Earthrealm"],
    ...
    }

    "Actions": {
    "Night": {
    "Poison": {
    "Target": "AnyButSelf",
    "Common": "role".
    "Priority": 10,
    "Broadcast": "none",
    "Limit": 99,
    "Count": 2

    "actions: {
    "night": {
    "mummy": {
    "command: "convert",
    "target": "any",
    "common": "self"
    "cultpl": [pretty lady]
    "cultbg": [bodyguard]
    "cult": ["villager"]

    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "expose": {
    "target": "Anybutself",
    "msg": "Use your natural /charm and expose them."
    "exposemsg": "Milleena charmed ~Target~ and reveals their role:
    }
    }
    }

    "drawmsg": FATALITY! Everyone died. Gimme my $60 for this game back!

    {
    "role": "Shao Kahn",
    "translation": "Shao Kahn",
    "side'; "Outworld"'
    . . . ,
    "actions": {
    "night": {"kill": { . . . , "recharge"; 2} ]
    }
    }

    Earthrealm consist of: Liu Kang, Sonya Blade, Jax, Johnny Cage, Kitana, Raiden, Cyber Sub-Zero, and Human.
    -Note- Cyrax and Smoke can win with Earthrealm
    The Lin Kuei consist of: Sub-Zero, Sektor, Cyrax, Smoke, and The Grandmaster.
    Outword consist of: Shao Kahn, Shang Tsung, Reptile, Milleena, Sindel, and Noob Saibot.
    The Netherrealm consist of: Scorpion, Quan Chi, and Lord Shinnok.

    Liu Kang- Day Killer w/ 60% Reveal.
    Sonya Blade- PL
    Raiden- Bodyguard
    Johnny Cage- Can Kill, Night Bomb. KABOOM!
    Kitana- +4 Vote. Gets 6% Hax On Kill, Poison, and Distract
    Jax- Gets One Piercing Kill. Also Safeguarder.
    Cyber Sub-Zero- Inspect.
    Human- No Commands

    Sub Zero- PL
    Sektor- Can Kill.
    Smoke- No Commands.
    Cyrax- Can Kill.
    The Grandmaster- Has A -3 Voteshield.

    Shao Kahn- Can /Hammer. /Hammer Pierces BG. /Hamer has a 2 Day Cooldown. Can be used with Noob Saibot's Kill. Evades PL.
    Reptile- Poison.
    Shang Tsung- Can /stalk.
    Milleena- Can /Charm during the day. Which exposes the target.
    Sindel- Can /Scream, which is a distract that outspeeds EVERYTHING, bgs, and night kills. But it can be haxed.
    Noob Saibot- Kills. Cannot be haxed.

    Scorpion- Can /burn which kills. If Scorpion kills Sub-Zero/ Cyber Sub-Zero he gets a boost that being he evades PL. Acts as poison.
    Quan Chi- Can /mummy which converts. Some targets keep previous commands.
    Lord Shinnok- Has a -99 Voteshield. Kills PL if it tries to PL him. Can Kill.

    Set-ups

    6- Human, Human, Human, Human, Human, Quan Chi.
    7- Human, Human, Human, Human, Human, Human, Quan Chi.
    8- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Cyrax, Sektor, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot
    9- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Cyrax, Sektor, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi.
    10- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Cyrax, Sektor, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    11- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Jax, Cyrax, Sektor, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    12- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Jax, Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    13- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Human, Jax, Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    14- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Human, Jax, Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Shang Tsung, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    15- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Human, Jax, Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Shang Tsung, Sindel, Quan Chi, Scorpion.
    16- Liu Kang, Raiden, Sonya, Human, Human, Jax, Johnny Cage, Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot, Quan Chi, Scorpion.


    WORK. IN. PROGRESS. All Criticism is excepted.

    VERY IMPORTANT
    Due to school starting, Paradoxial and I will not be updating the theme as much. But we don't intend to let it rot. If anyone would like to help with the theme please PM me either on the forum. Or on PO. Ciao! - LC aka Maurice
     
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  2. Withoutatrace

    Withoutatrace im a filthy weeb

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    "Distractmsg": "You were kissed by Sonya... then she ran off.",

    I died at that, I honestly have no idea why.

    "Msg": "Shao Kahn threw his hammer at your head. You didn't survive."
    This could be "Shao Kahn obliterated your skull with his hammer, splattering brains everywhere. Needless to say, you didn't survive."

    "help": "You are Liu Kang. Your powerful kicks give you a day kill. But you're role is revealed. Be careful is Shao Kahn is in.",
    You should make it less choppy, you transitioning words such as 'However', if you have a negative continuance, or just utilize commas. So, 'Your powerful kicks give you a day kill, but your role is revealed.'
    Also, is it a 60% chance, or just reveals regardless? Might want to mention that, and change the standby msg accordingly.

    "Revealmsg" "Liu Kang's face ~self~ was revealed during the attack!"
    "During the attack, ~self~ was revealed to be Liu Kang!", or some shit like that.

    I recommend throwing a 'FIGHT' somewhere in there, since it is quite an iconic phrase within the games. I would say replace the "NO ONE IS SAFE" within the summary with it.

    Netherrealm should be capitalized within it's winmsg.
     
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    Thank you. I appreciate any and all criticism. Bad or good. Also thanks for the help with the winmsg
     
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    I Found this to be interesting! A new fresh theme of a game i enjoy! Though i dont know much as to the whole theme making besides what i have read.(So i wont comment on that stuff) I do read a lot and Look for lines to capture my attention and make it more interesting and for the most part the winning messages? Where great! All except for the first win message for the EarthRealm. The rest of them? Spot on. Spot on. And i also laughed at the distract message it was cute and funny. Now for the EarthRealm winning message. Something a little more then "The Earthrealm has been saved. They have found peace." As it seems kind of bland. If i win i wanna be doing the kirby dance!!! So maybe "The Earthrealm has vanquished (Mafia name or here or whatever)! And know they may train in their newfound peace! Or take out train and do what you wish they to do. I dont know much on the back story of MK and i could be wrong with how i put the msg but if i am i am sorry. But your doing great! Im gonna keep a eye on this thread :P
     
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    I appreciate all feedback. I want you to comment on things that you think are meh. Like the Earthrealm winmsg. Thank you for commenting. I look forward to future comments.
     
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    Great theme idea to make cant wait till your done!
     
  7. The Elite LC

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    It's gonna be a while :D
     
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    ThunderStruck0011 ;)

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    Great idea of the Mortal Kombat theme... I wish you luck LC and hope it is one of the better themes so, we don't spam DN and Kirby all the time. (>•w•)>
     
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    Thanks. If you know anyone who actually knows how to do this quickly I would appreciate help. :D
     
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    ThunderStruck0011 ;)

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    Maybe a Mafia owner or admin...
     
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    Paradoxial Drawing an avatar sometime this year -.-

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    Thanks. I'm not the worlds best with grammar. If you come up short for roles, I have plenty more.
     
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    Paradoxial Drawing an avatar sometime this year -.-

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    -Priority In Order-
    Sindel, Jax (Crush), Shao Kahn (Hammer)
    Soya, Sub-Zero, Raiden/Jax, Noob Saibot, Johnny Cage, Cyrax, Sektor, Scorpion, Shang Tsung, Quan Chi.

    -Roles To Come-
    Jade- Can /Pole to Kill an enemy.
    - Note - Jade can win with Earthrealm and the Outworld, Also knows Kitana. Sided with Outworld.
    Nightwolf- Can either /Reflect to Votebomb. Or /Counter to Daybomb.

    [EDIT] More To Come!!

    [EDIT II]: Baraka- Can /Slice in the Day.
    - Note - Cannot Daykill Liu Kang.
    Hellspawn- Can Kill. Can also be used with Scorpion's /burn.
    Kung Lao- Can /Spin to Give Kung Lao a +10 Vote. Cannot be used until Night 3.

    Hey! LC here, aka Maurice! Lemme know any roles that should be added, or if one side is too "op". Ciao!

    [EDIT III]: Sheeva- Can Kill. Can be haxed.
    Kano- Has 15 Votes. (May be reduced...)
    Cyborg- Gets 8% Hax.

    Baraka is sided with Outworld.
    Hellspawn is sided with Netherrealm.
    Kung Lao is sided with Earthrealm.
    Sheeva is sided with Outworld.
    Kano is sided with Outworld.
    Cyborg is sided with the Lin Kuei.

    MORE EDITS TO BE MADE
    -LC aka Maurice. Ciao!

    [EDIT IV]: Nightwolf Can /Reflect to become a Nightbomb.
    Sided with Earthrealm.
    Ermac- Can /Lift to give the target a -5 vote.
    Sided with Outworld.
    Tarkatan Soldier- Know Baraka. Can /kill.
    Sided with Outworld.
    Stryker- Reveals as Human.
    Sided with Earthrealm.

    [EDIT V]: Kintaro- Vengeful.
    Sided with Outworld.
     
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