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Discussion in 'Review' started by Toph Beifong, Jun 27, 2014.

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  1. Toph Beifong

    Toph Beifong New Member

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    Pangaea asked me to remove this, then w/e
     
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  2. Shazan

    Shazan Obey to Kyubey

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    Sorry If I say this to you but how can your script works well on your server if the code isn't accepted even by jsonlint ?
     
  3. Pangaea

    Pangaea resto en peaco

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    Sorry but this theme has too many errors, it is not ready for review. There are many grammatical errors, and, just by taking one look at it,there is already so many things wrong. You didn't even include ~Players~ in the win messages, so how will anyone know who was a part of the winning team?

    There are is many errors, too many to even write down. I suggest this be moved to Theme Critique and Improvement, this just has too many errors and things wrong with it (code wise) that it isn't ready for review.
     
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    Shazan Obey to Kyubey

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    Ok look I have eliminated your code syntax errors check it HERE but is still full of other errors for the Icekirby checker, and by what I discussed with you on server this was a theme coded by some of your friends for a different server so it is possible that they uses a different code system and this is why is full of errors. So here what i want you to do:
    1) Ask to @Roild to move this thread to Theme development , because as it is now this theme is not good to be posted on review.
    2) Learn a little more how to code yourself , so that you will be able to fix the theme. Some useful thread to read are How to Make Mafia Themes , Bullethole to check the different features, and this Guidelines to learn how a theme should be to be posted on Review .
    3) I didn't checked the theme really in deep, but it looked a little unbalanced and a little similar to default, if I am wrong I am sorry, but if I am right try to make it more original and more then anything else a little more balanced before then reposting it on review.
    4) Your theme needs some extra roles, because your theme stops to spawn new roles on 26 players and instead start to spawn only villagers.

    P.S.
    NewFags is not a nice thing to say, so it would be better if you change term.
     
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