AQW (Adventure Quest Worlds)

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    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    AQW is an MMORPG online game. You may have seen an Advertisement for it on the Forums.
    The storyline is that Evil and Good fight against each other, Drakath appears and messes everything up and Evil and Good pose an alliance with each other to defeat the 13 Lords of Chaos. I decided to incorporate into a theme.
    (Props to Obey to Kyubey and RiceKirby for helping me fix the coding of the theme :).
    Code:
    {
    "name": "AQW",
    "altname": "Adventure Quest Worlds",
    "minplayers": 6,
    "summary": "Lore is a magical place where heroes can choose their destiny. Will you help against the fight against Chaos? Lore needs all the heroes it can get as Drakath, the Ultimate Chaos Lord, prepares his 13 Lords of Chaos! It is of best interest for both the Evil and Good sides to stop fighting each other, and fight the Chaos Lords and Drakath! It is recommended that both the Swordhaven and Shadowsythe sides should stop fighting each other, and fight Chaos. The cuddly moglins, however, don't care about their owners and the start of the Moglin Rebellion is on us!",
    "author": "Fiery Espeon",
    "lynchmsg": "~Player~ (~Role~) did not survive the cliff jump!",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "evil",
    "translation": "Shadowscythe",
    "winmsg": "The EVIL players, ~Players~, have prevailed! LONG LIVE THE SHADOWSCYTHE! "
    },
    {
    "side": "good",
    "translation": "Swordhaven",
    "winmsg": "~Players~ have rid themselves of all things chaotic and evil! "
    },
    {
    "side": "drakath",
    "translation": "13 Lords of Chaos",
    "winmsg": "The Mother of All Monsters will be released, and Chaos will rule Lore! Thanks to ~Players~!"
    },
    {
    "side": "moglins",
    "translation": "Moglins",
    "winmsg": "±Twilly: Finally we, ~Players~, are not the pets of the humans! The humans are our pets!."
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "evilmage",
    "translation": "Evil Mage",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Mages are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /necromancer and serve in the Shadowsythe Undead Army to become more powerful and get two poisons per game. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your Empress, Gravelyn, or she will surely be not happy. May the undead be with you.",
    "info": "Can change into a Necromancer (Two poisons per game). Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "necromancer": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Mage has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "evilnecromancer",
    "canConvert": [
    "evilmage"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodmage",
    "translation": "Good Mage",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "Mages are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /necromancer and serve in the Swordhaven Army to become more powerful and get two poisons per game. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your King, Alteon, or he will surely be not happy. May the knights be with you. Hope you don't turn into an Undead Slave! ^_^",
    "info": "Can change into a Necromancer (Two poisons per game). Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "necromancer": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Mage has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "goodnecromancer",
    "canConvert": [
    "goodmage"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evilrogue",
    "translation": "Evil Rogue",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Rogues are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /pirate and serve in the Shadowsythe Undead Army to become more powerful and get the ability to nightkill once per two days. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your Empress, Gravelyn, or she will surely be not happy. May the undead be with you.",
    "info": "Can change into a Pirate (Nightkill per two days). Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "pirate": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Rogue has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "evilpirate",
    "canConvert": [
    "evilrogue"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodrogue",
    "translation": "Good Rogue",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "Rogues are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /pirate and serve in the Swordhaven Army to become more powerful and get the ability to nightkill once per two days. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your King, Alteon, or he will surely be not happy. May the knights be with you. Hope you don't turn into an Undead Slave! ^_^",
    "info": "Can change into a Pirate (Nightkill per two days). Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "pirate": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Rogue has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "goodpirate",
    "canConvert": [
    "goodrogue"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evilhealer",
    "translation": "Evil Healer",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Healers are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /paladin and serve in the Shadowsythe Undead Army to become more powerful and get the ability to kill ONE person per game and protect someone every night. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your Empress, Gravelyn, or she will surely be not happy. May the undead be with you.",
    "info": "Can change into a Paladin (One kill per game, protect every night). Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "paladin": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Healer has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "evilpaladin",
    "canConvert": [
    "evilhealer"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodhealer",
    "translation": "Good Healer",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "Healers are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /paladin and serve in the Swordhaven Army to become more powerful and get the ability to kill ONE person per game and protect someone every night. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your King, Alteon, or he will surely be not happy. May the knights be with you. Hope you don't turn into an Undead Slave! ^_^",
    "info": "Can change into a Paladin (One kill per game, protect every night).",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "paladin": {
    "command": "convert",
    "convertmsg": "A Paladin has enhanced and changed classes!",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "newRole": "goodpaladin",
    "canConvert": [
    "goodhealer"
    ],
    "initialrecharge": 3,
    "silent": true
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evilnecromancer",
    "translation": "Evil Necromancer",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You are a Necromancer, serving for Evil! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game. Use the command /weaken to slowly drain your opponent's energy.",
    "info": "Can use two poisons per game. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "weaken": {
    "command": [
    "poison"
    ],
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 21,
    "charges": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodnecromancer",
    "translation": "Good Necromancer",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You are a Necromancer, serving for Good! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game. Use the command /weaken to slowly drain your opponent's energy.",
    "info": "Can use two poisons per game. Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "weaken": {
    "command": "poison",
    "target": "Any",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 21,
    "charges": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evilpirate",
    "translation": "Evil Pirate",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You have changed classes and you are now a Pirate! Your stealthy and aggresive skills allow you to /kill somebody every two nights, for EVIL!",
    "info": "Has a nightkill PER two days. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "recharge": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodpirate",
    "translation": "Good Pirate",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You have changed classes and you are now a Pirate! Your stealthy and aggresive skills allow you to /kill somebody every two nights, for GOOD!!",
    "info": "Has a nightkill PER two days. Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 15,
    "recharge": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evilpaladin",
    "translation": "Evil Paladin",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You have changed classes and now you are a Paladin, serving for Evil! Paladins are supposed to use light magic, but you use both dark and light magic! Use your dark magic to /kill someone, once per game! Use your light magic to /protect someone, every night!",
    "info": "Can kill once per game and protect every night. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 12,
    "charges": 1
    },
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodpaladin",
    "translation": "Good Paladin",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You have changed classes and now you are a Paladin, serving for Good! Paladins are supposed to use light magic, but you use both dark (fight fire with fire) and light magic! Use your dark magic to /kill someone, once per game! Use your light magic to /protect someone, every night!",
    "info": "Can kill once per game and protect every night. Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 12,
    "charges": 1
    },
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "drakath",
    "translation": "Drakath",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Drakath, the wielder of Chaos! Bring forth your 13 Lords of Chaos and open the Chaos Gate and release the Mother of All Monsters! Smh, the heroes should consider you as their god. Anyway, you have ONE /protect per game and you can /chaorrupt during the day. without being revealed, to kill somebody! You can hax all night actions done by your 13 Lords of Chaos so try to find and reveal yourself to them!",
    "info": "Can kill one person during the day (non-revealing). Has one self protect per game. Can hax all night actions done by the 13 Lords of Chaos. Sided with the 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "hydra": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "harpy": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "roc": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "dokuro": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "dracowerepyre": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "golem": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "atchoo": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    },
    "manticore": {
    "revealTeam": 1,
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    }
    },
    "standby": {
    "chaorrupt": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "msg": "You can now chaorrupt those who oppose you by using /chaorrupt [name]",
    "killmsg": "Drakath swiftly unsheathes his Chaos blade...! ~Target~ is found on the ground...dead and covered with Chaotic Eyes!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "escherion",
    "translation": "Escherion",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Escherion, the 1st Lord of Chaos! You have inverted the entire town of Mobius and confused everyone! You have unleashed the 1st Chaos Beast, the Chaos HYdra! Use /hydra during the night to distract and confuse someone! Make sure not to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can distract someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "hydra": {
    "command": "distract",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "xiang",
    "translation": "Xiang",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Xiang, the 2nd Lord of Chaos! You have chaorrupted the Mirror Realm and caused everlasting unbalance! You have unleashed the 2nd Chaos Beast, the Chaos Harpy! Use /harpy during the night to poison and slowly chaorrupt someone! Make sure not to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can poison someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "harpy": {
    "command": "poison",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 19
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "vath",
    "translation": "Vath",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Vath, the 3rd Lord of Chaos! You have invaded and enslaved all of Dwarfhold by using your Chaotic Dragon Stalagbite! You have unleashed the 3rd Chaos Beast, the Chaos Rock Roc! Use /roc during the night to protect and save someone! Make sure to protect your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can distract someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "roc": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "kitsune",
    "translation": "Kitsune",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Kitsune, the 4th Lord of Chaos! You have stealthily chaorrupted all of Yokai Isle and got rid of the Emperor! You have unleashed the 4th Chaos Beast, the O-Dokuro! Use /dokuro during the night to stalk someone! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can stalk someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "dokuro": {
    "command": "stalk",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 40
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "wolfwing",
    "translation": "Wolfwing",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Wolfwing, the 5th Lord of Chaos! You have chaorrupted the entire faction of Darkovia and caused war between the vampires and Werewolves! You have unleashed the 5th Chaos Beast, the Chaorrupted Dracowerepyre! Use /dracowerepyre during the night to kill and cause trouble! Make sure not to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can kill someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "dracowerepyre": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 11
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "kimberly",
    "translation": "Kimberly",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Kimberly, the 6th Lord of Chaos! You have inverted the Mythsong Valley and chaorrupted all music! You have unleashed the 6th Chaos Beast, the Pony Gary Yellow! Use /yellow during the day to reveal their role, without you being exposed! Make sure not to expose your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can expose someone during the day without being revealed. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "yellow": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can now /yellow [name] to expose someone without being revealed!",
    "exposemsg": "Pony Gary Yellow takes ~Target~ to the past, and ~Role~ returns, being hypnotized by Kimberly's Chaotic music!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "ledgermayne",
    "translation": "Ledgermayne",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Ledgermayne, the 7th Lord of Chaos! You have chaorrupted the Para Elmental Plane of Magic and Arcangrove. Drakath does not trust you, as some types of chaorruption cannot be controlled. You have unleashed the 7th Chaos Beast, the Mana Golem! Use /golem to detoxify and heal someone from poison! Make sure to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can detoxify someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "golem": {
    "command": "detox",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tibicenas",
    "translation": "Tibicenas",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Tibicenas, the 8th Lord of Chaos! You have chaorrupted both the Djinn world and Sandsea! You have unleashed the 8th Chaos Beast, the Chaos Sphinx! Because of your betrayal to the Djinn World, you have lost your standing and now have a -5 votepower. Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Has -5 votes. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "vote": -5
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "khaasanda",
    "translation": "Khaasanda",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Khaasanda, the 9th Lord of Chaos! You have chaorrupted the Bloodtusk Ravin and caused war between the trolls and the horcs! You have unleashed the 9th Chaos Beast, the Gruaige Bass! Because you ended up having to kill your own brother, you don't like Drakath but is forced to work with him. In order to escape from your imprisonment, you have made sure that 3 votes are added to the total when your voted. Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Has 3 votes added to the toral vote. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "voteshield": 3
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "iadoa",
    "translation": "Iadoa",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Iadoa, the 10th Lord of Chaos! You have tried to help the Hero destroy Chaos but he failed! Since you have such a good connection with the non chaotic forces, you can inspect and find out which role someone is! You have unleashed the 10th Chaos Beast, the Kathool Atchoo! Use /atchoo to inspect someone during the night. Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can inspect someone during the night Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "atchoo": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 14
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "lionfang",
    "translation": "Lionfang",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Lionfang, the 11th Lord of Chaos! You have killed the entire faction of Thunderforge! You have unleashed the 11th Chaos Beast, the Chaos Manticore! Use /manticore during the night to kill and cause trouble! Make sure not to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can kill someone during the night. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "manticore": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 14
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "alteon",
    "translation": "Chaorrupted Alteon",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "You are Chaorrupted Alteon, the 12th Lord of Chaos! You were the King of Swordhaven... before you chaorrupted your kingdom and killed your daughter! Your younger self is trying to stop you. You have unleashed the 11th Chaos Beast, the Chaos Dragon! Use /dragon during the day to kill but you will be revealed! Make sure not to hit your fellow Chaos Lords or Drakath! Drakath is the only person that knows who you are so be wary of fakers! ",
    "info": "Can kill someone during the day, but will be revealed. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "dragon": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can now kill all those who stop you and your younger self by using /dragon [name]. But you will be revealed!",
    "killmsg": "~Self~ orders the Chaorrupted Paladins to unleash their power on ~Target~! Sadly, ~Role~ did not survive!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cynari",
    "translation": "Cynari",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You are Cynari, defender of Swordhaven and King Alteon! King Alteon has ordered you to give him more time to find a cure for his chaorruption and thus you have the power to /stall and distract someone from doing their actions! ",
    "info": "Can distract someone during the night. Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stall": {
    "command": "distract",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hero",
    "translation": "Chaorrupted Hero",
    "side": "drakath",
    "help": "Mages are one of the most basic classes of AQW. Use /necromancer and serve in the Shadowsythe Undead Army to become more powerful and get two poisons per game. Right now... you can only vote. Make sure you do not vote your Empress, Gravelyn, or she will surely be not happy. May the undead be with you.",
    "info": "Reveals as Evil Mage. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "evilmage"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "gravelyn",
    "translation": "Gravelyn",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You are Gravelyn, the Empress of the Shadowsythe! You eternally hate Drakath, for killing your father and causing the Shadowsythe Empire to crash into Shadowfall. You are even willing to make a temperary alliance with Swordhaven! Use /alliance during the day to declare the alliance, you will not be revealed! Gather your mages, rogues and healers and LONG UNLIVE THE SHADOWSYTHE! ",
    "info": "Can order an alliance with Swordhaven. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "alliance": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Self",
    "msg": "You can now make an alliance using /alliance [name and you will not be revealed!",
    "exposemsg": "The Power of Chaos...is so...strong. We must form an alliance with Swordhaven, or Lore will surely die out!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "goodalteon",
    "translation": "King Alteon",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You are King Alteon, the King of Swordhaven! You eternally hate Drakath, for chaorrupting you! Your older self is chaorrupted and is trying to stop you! You aer willing to form an alliance with the Shadowsythe in order to defeat Drakath and his 13 Lords of Order! Use /alliance to declare the alliance, you will not be revealed! Gather your mages, rogues and healers and BATTLE ON! ",
    "info": "Can order an alliance with the Shadowsythe. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "alliance": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Self",
    "msg": "You can now make an alliance using /alliance [name and you will not be revealed!",
    "exposemsg": "The Power of Chaos...is so...strong. We must form an alliance with the Shadowsythe, or Lore will surely die out!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "artix",
    "translation": "Artix",
    "side": "good",
    "help": "You are well known through out Lore for your passion for killing the enemies of Swordhaven! Use /kill during the night to rid of Swordhaven's opponents, what ever they may be, either Chaotic or Evil. Make sure not to hit your King, Alteon. You can also use /inspect to find out what someone's role may be, in order to exterminate Chaos! You can't use kill and inspect on the same night, or twice in a row. ",
    "info": "Can kill or inspect one person during the night, alternating between both. Sided with Swordhaven.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 23,
    "recharge": 2,
    "restrict": [
    "kill"
    ]
    },
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 12,
    "recharge": 2,
    "restrict": [
    "inspect"
    ]
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "dage",
    "translation": "Dage The Evil",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You are well known through out Lore for your Evil Legion! You are now serving under Empress Gravelyn and /kill to destroy one of Shadowsythe's enemies! Use /inspect to find your enemies, rather it be Chaos than Good. You cannot use kill and inspect on the same night, nor twice in a row. Remember not to hit Empress Gravelyn! ",
    "info": "Can kill or inspect one person during the night, alternating between both. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 23,
    "recharge": 2,
    "restrict": [
    "kill"
    ]
    },
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 12,
    "recharge": 2,
    "restrict": [
    "inspect"
    ]
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tibias",
    "translation": "Tibias",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You are Tibias, defender of Shadowfall and Shadowsythe! You have sword to defend Gravelyn and her kingdom! Use /defend every night to protect Gravelyn or one of her subjects from danger! ",
    "info": "Can protect someone during the night. Sided with Shadowsythe.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "defend": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "quibble",
    "translation": "Quibble",
    "side": "moglins",
    "info": "Vote counts as 200. Voteshield of -2000. Sided with Moglins.",
    "help": "You are Quibble, the Moglins with all the shops and all the gold! Because of your high power in Battleon and those humans that can easily be fooled with your irresistible rare items, you have a vote of 200! Further more, none of the humans want you gone and you have a -2000 voteshield! Work with Zorbak and Twilly to get rid of those pesky humans!",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "vote": 200,
    "voteshield": -2000
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "zorback",
    "translation": "Zorbak",
    "side": "moglins",
    "help": "You are Zorbak, 100% EBiL! You have decided to tean up with Twilly, the healing moglin! You are tired of those pesky humans, asking for heals and quests that you and Twilly have decided to rebel! Use /kill during the day to eliminate one of those humans! You will not be revealed. Team up with Twilly and Quibble and let the Moglins take the world! ",
    "info": "Can kill one person during the day, without being revealed. Sided with The Moglins.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "msg": "You can now /kill someone! You will not be revealed..",
    "killmsg": "Zorbak uses his Dark Staff to eliminate ~Target~ from Lore! HE WAS KILLED BY 100% EBIL!"
    }
    },
    "teamTalk": true
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "twilly",
    "translation": "Twilly",
    "side": "moglins",
    "help": "You are Twilly, the healer and quest giver moglin! The humans took advantage of you, and now you are teaming up with Zorbak and Quibble to get rid of them. Your healing tendencies allow you to /protect someone every night, including yourself. You also have a vote of 2 because of your high standings in Battleon. ",
    "info": "Can protect one person during the night. Has a vote of 2. Sided with The Moglins.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "vote": 2,
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "Any",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "teamTalk": true
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "evilmage",
    "goodhealer",
    "tibias",
    "cynari",
    "artix",
    "dage",
    "wolfwing",
    "escherion",
    "goodrogue",
    "evilrogue",
    "khaasanda"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "evilmage",
    "goodhealer",
    "tibias",
    "cynari",
    "artix",
    "dage",
    "wolfwing",
    "escherion",
    "goodrogue",
    "evilrogue",
    "khaasanda",
    "gravelyn",
    "goodalteon",
    "drakath",
    "goodmage",
    "evilmage",
    "xiang",
    "tibicenas"
    ],
    "roles3": [
    "evilmage",
    "goodhealer",
    "tibias",
    "cynari",
    "artix",
    "dage",
    "wolfwing",
    "escherion",
    "goodrogue",
    "evilrogue",
    "khaasanda",
    "gravelyn",
    "alteon",
    "drakath",
    "goodmage",
    "evilmage",
    "xiang",
    "evilhealer",
    "vath",
    "zorback",
    "evilpirate",
    "kitsune",
    "kimberly",
    "ledgermayne",
    "goodpirate",
    "goodmage",
    "twilly"
    ],
    "roles4": [
    "evilmage",
    "goodhealer",
    "tibias",
    "cynari",
    "artix",
    "dage",
    "wolfwing",
    "escherion",
    "goodrogue",
    "evilrogue",
    "khaasanda",
    "gravelyn",
    "alteon",
    "drakath",
    "goodmage",
    "evilmage",
    "xiang",
    "evilhealer",
    "vath",
    "twilly",
    "evilpirate",
    "kitsune",
    "kimberly",
    "ledgermayne",
    "quibble",
    "goodmage",
    "tibicenas",
    "evilhealer",
    "khaasanda",
    "hero",
    "goodmage",
    "alteon",
    "evilpirate",
    "iadoa",
    "lionfang",
    "evilhealer",
    "goodpirate",
    "goodmage",
    "evilhealer",
    "goodhealer"
    ],
    "killmsg": "±Death: ~Player~ (~Role~) was not able to respawn in time!",
    "killusermsg": "You have been fully chaorrupted!",
    "drawmsg": "The battle is over and Lore is still not safe! Everyone has died!",
    "changelog": {
    "6.22.2014": "Completed theme"
    }
    }

    http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=6Y1b5V7K

    Roles:
    Evil or Good Mage- can convert to Necromancer
    Evil or Good Necromancer- has two poisons per game
    Evil or Good Healer- can convert to Paladin
    Evil or Good Paladin- one time kill and bodyguard
    Evil of Good Rogue- can convert into pirate
    Evil of Good Pirate- Can kill one person every night
    Gravelyn- can alliance during the day to declare that Evil is willing to team up with Good to get rid of Chaos
    Alteon- can alliance during the day to declare that Good is willing to team up with Evil to get rid of Chaos
    Artix- can kill and inspect, can't use same on both night, nor twice in a row
    Dage the Evil- can kill and inspect, can't use same on both night, nor twice in a row.
    Escherion- Can distract someone.
    Xiang- can poison someone
    Vath- can protect someone
    Kitsune- Can stalk someone
    Wolfwing- Can kill someone
    Kimberly- Can expose someone
    Ledgermayne- Can detoxify someone
    Tibicenas- Has a -5 vote
    Khaasanda- Has a +3 voteshield.
    Iadoa- Has an inspect.
    Lionfang- Has a kill.
    Chaorrupted Alteon- Has a revealing daykill.
    Zorback- Has a Non Revealing daykill
    Twilly- Has a BG, that can be used on Zorback or himself.
    Drakath- Has a one time BG, can daykill without being revealed
    Chaorrupted Hero- Thinks he is Evil Mage; Miller
    Priority
    Priority List:
    [1] Escherion (Hydra)
    [1] Cynari (Stall)
    [2] Drakath (Protect)
    [2] Ledgermayne (Golem)
    [2] Good Paladin (Protect)
    [2] Vath (Roc)
    [2] Evil Paladin (Protect)
    [2] Tibias (Defend)
    [2] Twilly (Protect)
    [11] Wolfwing (Dracowerepyre)
    [12] Evil Paladin (Kill)
    [12] Dage The Evil (Kill)
    [12] Good Paladin (Kill)
    [12] Artix (Kill)
    [14] Iadoa (Atchoo)
    [14] Lionfang (Manticore)
    [15] Evil Mage (Necromancer)
    [15] Evil Pirate (Kill)
    [15] Good Pirate (Kill)
    [15] Evil Healer (Paladin)
    [15] Good Mage (Necromancer)
    [15] Good Healer (Paladin)
    [15] Evil Rogue (Pirate)
    [15] Good Rogue (Pirate)
    [19] Xiang (Harpy)
    [21] Evil Necromancer (Weaken)
    [21] Good Necromancer (Weaken)
    [23] Artix (Inspect)
    [23] Dage The Evil (Inspect)
    [40] Kitsune (Dokuro)
    Spawn

    List 1(6~11 players):
    1. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    2. █ Good Healer (goodhealer)
    3. █ Tibias (tibias)
    4. █ Cynari (cynari)
    5. █ Artix (artix)
    6. █ Dage The Evil (dage)
    7. █ Wolfwing (wolfwing)
    8. █ Escherion (escherion)
    9. █ Good Rogue (goodrogue)
    10. █ Evil Rogue (evilrogue)
    11. █ Khaasanda (khaasanda)

    List 2(12~18 players):
    1. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    2. █ Good Healer (goodhealer)
    3. █ Tibias (tibias)
    4. █ Cynari (cynari)
    5. █ Artix (artix)
    6. █ Dage The Evil (dage)
    7. █ Wolfwing (wolfwing)
    8. █ Escherion (escherion)
    9. █ Good Rogue (goodrogue)
    10. █ Evil Rogue (evilrogue)
    11. █ Khaasanda (khaasanda)
    12. █ Gravelyn (gravelyn)
    13. █ King Alteon (goodalteon)
    14. █ Drakath (drakath)
    15. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    16. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    17. █ Xiang (xiang)
    18. █ Tibicenas (tibicenas)

    List 3(19~27 players):
    1. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    2. █ Good Healer (goodhealer)
    3. █ Tibias (tibias)
    4. █ Cynari (cynari)
    5. █ Artix (artix)
    6. █ Dage The Evil (dage)
    7. █ Wolfwing (wolfwing)
    8. █ Escherion (escherion)
    9. █ Good Rogue (goodrogue)
    10. █ Evil Rogue (evilrogue)
    11. █ Khaasanda (khaasanda)
    12. █ Gravelyn (gravelyn)
    13. █ Chaorrupted Alteon (alteon)
    14. █ Drakath (drakath)
    15. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    16. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    17. █ Xiang (xiang)
    18. █ Evil Healer (evilhealer)
    19. █ Vath (vath)
    20. █ Zorbak (zorback)
    21. █ Evil Pirate (evilpirate)
    22. █ Kitsune (kitsune)
    23. █ Kimberly (kimberly)
    24. █ Ledgermayne (ledgermayne)
    25. █ Good Pirate (goodpirate)
    26. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    27. █ Twilly (twilly)

    List 4(28~40 players):
    1. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    2. █ Good Healer (goodhealer)
    3. █ Tibias (tibias)
    4. █ Cynari (cynari)
    5. █ Artix (artix)
    6. █ Dage The Evil (dage)
    7. █ Wolfwing (wolfwing)
    8. █ Escherion (escherion)
    9. █ Good Rogue (goodrogue)
    10. █ Evil Rogue (evilrogue)
    11. █ Khaasanda (khaasanda)
    12. █ Gravelyn (gravelyn)
    13. █ Chaorrupted Alteon (alteon)
    14. █ Drakath (drakath)
    15. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    16. █ Evil Mage (evilmage)
    17. █ Xiang (xiang)
    18. █ Evil Healer (evilhealer)
    19. █ Vath (vath)
    20. █ Twilly (twilly)
    21. █ Evil Pirate (evilpirate)
    22. █ Kitsune (kitsune)
    23. █ Kimberly (kimberly)
    24. █ Ledgermayne (ledgermayne)
    25. █ Quibble (quibble)
    26. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    27. █ Tibicenas (tibicenas)
    28. █ Evil Healer (evilhealer)
    29. █ Khaasanda (khaasanda)
    30. █ Chaorrupted Hero (hero)
    31. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    32. █ Chaorrupted Alteon (alteon)
    33. █ Evil Pirate (evilpirate)
    34. █ Iadoa (iadoa)
    35. █ Lionfang (lionfang)
    36. █ Evil Healer (evilhealer)
    37. █ Good Pirate (goodpirate)
    38. █ Good Mage (goodmage)
    39. █ Evil Healer (evilhealer)
    40. █ Good Healer (goodhealer

    Happy Reviewing! (Again thanks to Obey to Kyubey and RiceKirby)
    www.aq.com<<< There is a Wiki.
    @Roild pls I exist too.
    The thing that makes my theme unique is that there is no definite "village". You could see the Shadowsythe and Swordhaven as Mini Villages, with the ability to protect, kill and Inspect w/ a leader that is there to be a connector, but also a link between the two villages. They do not win together, but they can form an alliance to get rid of Chaos 1st, before they get rid of each other. The Chaos Lords are the players with the Complex roles. Drakath knows all of them, but they don't know each other. They have to connect each other in order to use their actions and votes likewise. Also, the convert roles can decide to be PR or stay as a village, if they decide to have no actions and not be a real target. (This is a useful strategy sometimes)
     
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  2. Trolls

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    I like how you put it as there is no defiinite village in this theme, it makes it very unique to other themes and original.

    I don't think it's good to spawn both healers and mages in the smaller games, the game might go really fast and extreme with the kills despite that the the healers only have one kill per game, when converted. Maybe if you nerf them a bit in the small games but then put their old form back in the medium to big games?

    I can see what you've done with Artix and Dage the evil, it makes sense and is balanced.

    Zorback should also not be spawning in the small games as I said it feels that there would be a killfest.

    Tibicenas should have a night kill and so should Khaasanda.


    Here are some mistakes in your coding:

    On the evilnecromancer's help message, at the end of the first sentence you forgot to put a space after the full stop.
    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You are a Necromancer, serving for Evil! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game.Use the command /weaken to slowly drain your opponent's energy.",
    This is the same for good necromancer.
    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You are a Necromancer, serving for Good! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game.Use the command /weaken to slowly drain your opponent's energy.",
     
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  3. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    I didn't want so many nightkills as the Chaos Lords don't have a shared one so I didn't want to give Khaasanda and Tibicenas nightkills. I replaced Zor5 back with Khaasanda and I think replaces the whole too many Nightkill problem. Since Escherion Can PL and all the convert roles can't use their actions on n1, I think it's a good balance. Khaasanda is the weaker of the Chaos Lords. Anyway, fixed help msg and spawn.
    http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=dFRyu4Rk Updated Link
    Escherion can easily PL Artix/Dage the Evil or a Healer/Necromancer, and cause them not to change/kill/inspect. So, Escherion will know if the target is Artix/Dage or a Necromancer/Healer and there are so many in the spawn because Evil and Good are different sides. And Necromancer can poison only two people during the game.
     
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  4. Trolls

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    I'm still not sure about Khaasanda with the +5 voteshield in the small games, despite it's side has 3 roles in it for the small games. I understand that it is supposed to be the weakest role but maybe lower the voteshield down to +3, or you can add a one time inspect for the role.
     
  5. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    Changing Khaasanda's voteshield to +2
    Updated Pastebin and OP
     
  6. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    To be honest this is going to take a lot of work to get a test/approve from me as a lot is fairly questionable..

    You have capitalized random words in helps and infos like "PER game"... i can understand to put emphasis on it, but "per GAME" puts emphasis on what you want to be emphasized. Personally, randomly capitalized words just make your theme look unpolished.

    I dont like how most of the good/evil roles have identical helps barring a word or two. I think it would be better if you made a seperate help for both sides, even if the roles do the same thing.

    Your spawn order is very, very questionable seeing how from 10-14 you add 4 chaos members and only one good role in the middle.

    The two 'king' roles seem silly and pointless to me since if the point is the good and evil to work together to beat the chaos... then why will an 'alliance' be needed. People will just ally with them by default.

    I'll review more later.
     
  7. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    From 10-14, there are only 3 Chaos Roles added and one Evil Role and one Good Role. People will not be open about the idea about allying themselves against roles that aren't in their Current Team. Gravelyn and Alteon are there so if the Chaos Lords are not the problem at the moment, they don't alliance and continue fighting each other. But if they are a problem, they will inform all people on their side without revealing their self that Evil/Good is not the target now. Gravelyn/Alteon is also a person to connect to if needed for Dage The Evil/Artix. Also, they can PM each other and share information and there is no harm done because they don't really have an important action later in the game.
    I fixed the Capitol Words and the code is updated. I also personalized some of the help messages to the best of my ability.
    Updated Code: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=dFRyu4Rk
     
  8. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    I'm gonna just drop a Decline [1] here for the time being.

    I dont even know where to start. You have 37 actions in a 40 game at max and you have a 14 member connected mafia team with seperate actions for each one.

    http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=9s4vyP2K

    This is just plain ridiculous

    You have 2 Daykills, a Distract, a Poison, a Protect, a Stalk, 2 Night Kills, an Expose, a Detox, a -5 Vote, an Inspect, a Hated (+3 Voteshield), and a Miller.

    And keep in mind that they are connected.

    I cannot fathom how a member of QC can think this is OK.
     
  9. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    They are not fully connected, only Drakath knows who all of them are and he has to connect everyone. In a 40 player game, its Alliance (34) vs Chaos (14) vs Moglins (2). Also, I am going to change some things. Including, all convert roles cannot convert until n3. I might also remove Drakath knowing who his Chaos Lords are and instead, give him hax change for certain actions.
     
  10. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    Drakath should be able to fully connect them every time since the only roles that can kill or daykill have to convert to do so, meaning that at WORST, Drakath will be out by d1. also.. how does 34 + 14 + 2 = 40? Its 24 + 14 + 2. Those 14 will be connected if Drakath is competent and does their job.

    Assuming that those 24 all work together, which would be a miracle in itself seeing how most mafia players wouldn't ally themselves with somebody not on their team, thus hurting their cause. (also how are moglins supposed to win, lmao.)

    Even so, 14 informed players vs 24 uninformed players and then a subgroup that I guarantee will hardly ever win a game, if at all. If this is balance to you then I dont know what to say.
     
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    Hmm after looking at the big spawn i can understand what mew2 is saying.

    Drakath shouldn't be able to know their teammates if you are going to put that much mafias in.

    You should really lower the numbers of mafia's in drakath's team if the moglins are going to win.

    You really need to balance the big games as things are going down the hill or I will have to decline this theme until you fix it.
     
  12. RudeStyle

    RudeStyle A year late x D

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    This is really unbalanced and it seems that mewtwohidden has covered most the points so either way i think the number of mafia is going to have to decrease in exchange for an increase on the subgroup (moglins) and nerf drakath so he cannot know all of his team mates. Maybe make it so that he knows one or two of his team mates and work from there.

    Please make some changes otherwise I'll have to decline as well.
     
  13. Pangaea

    Pangaea resto en peaco

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    Ok, here we go.

    First off, some your actions are way to long. /necromancer and /chaorrupt are only two examples. These actions are way too long and people might find pain in having to type all of this out.

    Lots of grammatical errors, I don't even know where to start. Your info messages are worded very weirdly. (Can kill someone per two days, should be "Can kill someone every two days." And this is just one info message, many of the info messages are worded like this.

    There are so many kills and poisons in this theme that it's ridiculous, and there is an excessive amount of converts. I'm not even sure why all these roles have to convert during the night in order to perform their action.

    Code (text):
    1. "You are a Necromancer, serving for Evil! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game.
    Why does "per" have to be capitalized? I don't really understand this.
    Code (text):
    1. "info": "Miller. Sided with 13 Lords of Chaos.",
    Not everybody knows what a miller is.

    You have 2 Daykills, a Distract, a Poison, a Protect, a Stalk, 2 Night Kills, an Expose, a Detox, a -5 Vote, an Inspect, a Hated (+3 Voteshield), and a Miller.
    Code (text):
    1. "info": "Can change into a Paladin (One kill per game, protect every night).", Doesn't even state what team he is on.
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    There are too many poisons in this theme that you are probably sure to be poisoned by the end of a game, especially in large games. This excessive amounts of kills and poisons could leave to killfests during the night, and most of these protects don't even matter during the night.

    What exactly does alliance do? It says it exposes but the message doesn't even reveal anybody's role.

    Too. Many. Kills. You have an inspector, who can kill. Another inspector, who can kill. A bodyguard, who can kill. And then you have roles who can convert and gain two poisons, and some of them can even gain a kill. On top of that, almost every role in this theme can poison/kill someone.

    There is just too many kills and actions for the good guys. You have 2 daykills, a distract, a poison, a protect, 2 night kills, a stalk, an expose, a detox (which honestly doesn't matter due to the excessive amount of poisons in this theme), a -5 voter, an inspector (who can kill), someone with a +3 voteshield, and a miller. And to top that off, Drakath knows who all of them are and can connect every single one of these roles. That's ridiculous. You also have 14 mafia roles connected, all of which have their own action.

    Extremely unbalanced, especially in large games. Not to mention you included a team which will probably never win a single game. How are the moglins supposed to win?

    Assuming Draktath does his job and connects everybody, large games will be extremely unbalanced and they just won't work, not too mention the large amount of kills and poisons of kills in this theme. Also, the spawn is really...just, strange, you really have just such a large mafia team, it's very unbalanced.

    These are only the big things wrong with your theme, there are still many themes wrong in terms of grammar, spelling, and coding.

    Sorry, but I am going to have to Decline [2] due to all the reasons I stated above, and many more.



     
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  14. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    Drakath does not know his teammates anymore, instead he can hax all of his teammates with night commands (10% chance of revealing player).
    All convert roles can not convert until night 3. Also added Quibble to Moglins. Quibble has 200 votes and a 2000 voteshield. He knows his teammates.
    Also added Cynari and Tibias. Tibias is a BG sided With Evil and Cynari is a PL sided with Good.
    I fixed the capitalized words and the "Miller" info message.
    Updated Code: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=ZpaZdQvj
    The point of the /alliance is to show that the side is willing to not target another side but only target Chaos.
    Now in a game of 40, only 14 roles can use night actions n1/n2.
     
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  15. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    you didn't tell any of the mages/rogues/healers that they have to wait until n3 to convert.

    drakath is told that he has one protect per game but the code has him having a protect every night, fix this.

    all of the 'chaos lords' are told that drakath knows them, and it doesn't, it can just hax them.

    a lot of the commands are very long. do you expect somebody to type out /dracowerepyre while using logic to pick out a suitable target, maybe you could target a random person in that timeframe, but not if you actually think it out.

    I still don't think you understand my issue with the good/evil alliance thing. Imagine a typical mafia game, a lot of the time the village isnt going to properly connect together especially as games get bigger. now, how do you expect an average mafia player to know to connect with a side that is against them. I can understand the /alliance commands, but I don't see it working as /well/ as you seem to foresee.

    the games are 12 v 12 v 14 v 3, whether or not you want good/evil to work together. also, that 14p mafia still has a method to connect and is leaps and bounds more powerful than good, evil, or the moglins.
     
  16. Fiery Espeon

    Fiery Espeon The fire never bothered me anyway ~

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    Fixed all things mentioned in the above post^
    New Code: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=6Y1b5V7K
    Removed Chaos Hero, so its 12 vs 13 vs 13 vs 3.
    I fixed the long commands and I am keeping King Roles as more of a connecting figure and to inform people that they should target Chaos.
    I will fix OP later.
     
  17. canterbury egg

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    I'm reviewing what I see in the OP, as I believe that to be the current code. Let me know if it's not.

    My first issue (similar to a lot of the other reviews) is the huge amount of roles. Even in the themes with a lot of named roles (FF, DN, etc) there's still a village role. It doesn't make sense not to have a village role here - not only does it complicate things, it basically means you can just claim a role and no one can really contest you (of course, whether or not that would matter for the theme, I'd have to test - just an observation).

    Why do your 13 lords of chaos all have commands that aren't what they actually do? If you asked me what /harpy or /roc did, I would have NO idea. /chaorrupt for a kill is fine, because it's referenced all over, but I would spend a lot of time typing /stalk before I realized it wasn't the right command.

    What's up with the Quibble having +200 votes and a -2000 voteshield? Is there a situation where those both come into play?

    Like the other reviews, I'm confused by the CAPS, and some of the grammar is wrong. There's not a whole lot more I can say. I'll hold off on making a verdict until I get a response though (the lack of a "village" role being more important to explain than the others).
     
  18. IceKirby

    IceKirby A.K.A. RiceKirby

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    Players will often self-vote in masses to find Kuja roles. The voteshield is there so the player can safely self-vote.

    If it's not a Village vs. Mafia theme, then a villager is not necessary. There are no Villagers in Trainers, for example, since it doesn't follow the VxM setup.
     
  19. canterbury egg

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    That does sufficiently explain the lack of a Village role, though it does open the theme up to a lot of complication, especially with all of the self-conversion... something that I don't think is handled as well here as it is in, for example, Trainers.

    In regards to the Quibble, why don't the votes and voteshield just equal each other then?
     
  20. Trolls

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    You still need to fix the random capitalized words in the winmsg and some other roles here are some examples

    Code (text):
    1. "winmsg": "The EVIL players, ~Players~, have prevailed! LONG LIVE THE SHADOWSCYTHE! "
    There is no need for all caps in the word 'Evil', neither for the end phrase.

    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You are a Necromancer, serving for Evil! Your ability to command the undead and your mage abilities allows you to poison two people PER game. Use the command /weaken to slowly drain your opponent's energy.",
    Again the caps are not needed for the word 'Per', it's very useless.

    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You have changed classes and you are now a Pirate! Your stealthy and aggresive skills allow you to /kill somebody every two nights, for EVIL!",
    Most of the stuff will be repeated so I'm not going to say it again.

    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You have changed classes and you are now a Pirate! Your stealthy and aggresive skills allow you to /kill somebody every two nights, for GOOD!!",
    Code (text):
    1. "help": "You are Zorbak, 100% EBiL!
    Theres a grammar mistake.

    These are only some examples, I'm pretty sure there are more errors so for now I'm going to have to Decline [3]. As I said this theme has many errors in the coding and balanced issues and more stuff that I said in the post before this. I don't think this theme is ready for review at the moment.
     
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  21. IceKirby

    IceKirby A.K.A. RiceKirby

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    That's the winmsg, the caps is obvious there for styling purposes.

    Themes are now being declined for random caps in the help messages that doesn't even affect the game? That's what is sounds from this post, since you says there are too many errors, but you focus on grammar/spelling errors.
     
  22. Trolls

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    I've also said balanced issues as well like having too much kills, poisons lots of mafias in the big games that can win easily. I've also said some stuff about the balance issues in my post before that one.
     
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