Narrated by Tyki! As usual, we would like to know what you thought about the battle and the narration. On a scale of 1 to 10 - 1 is terrible, 5 is average, and 10 is perfect - please vote on this. After voting, you are advised to post why you voted. It will NOT count if you don't.
Haha, this was my first narration in awhile, so I do admit there were some mistakes that are present.
no problems with narration from what i could tell. i think the sprites were made too thin and beastly's team were all labelled with the wrong name. otherwise a neat battle and a good video.
The battle was good, the narration was great, it's just that the main problem, like Aurist stated, is the mix-up with Beastly's Pokemon (like Excaviler being named as Uxie and vise versa).
Givin this an 8. I liked the battle a lot (hence why I approved it) and thought you guys did a fine job with it. Derwin as usual was solid, that was prolly the best narration I've heard from Tyki yet (no offense, wasn't a huge fan of your earlier ones but you've improved just in your confidence and delivery imo) My constructive criticism: slow down a little. The battle seemed quite choppy, since it was sped up and slowed down a lot to match the narration. I think its okay to slow down to explain key turns which you did a good job of, but for non key turns I thought you went way too fast. It made it a little hard to follow, you didn't even come close to hitting everything that happened and you missed a few key chances to comment on stuff. And I think that the frantic pace is what made you mis-speak on a few occasions. But yeah otherwise I thought it was a solid job.