Birds(Real)

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  1. Silone

    Silone Kanade <3

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    This is a theme that me and Espeon made made since she wanted to know how.I present you...Birds! If its boring just say so we can always add more roles.Scanned it through Rice's Checker and JSONLint

    Pastebin Link-http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=ijHQ5HKR
    Here's another way:
    {
    "name": "Birds",
    "miniplayers": 7,
    "author": [
    "Silone",
    "Espeon"
    ],
    "minplayers": 10,
    "summary": "The birds are at war! The extinct birds have come back for revenge! Get your claws and beaks ready for a battle you wont forget! PM Silone or Espeon if you have any questions, comments, concerns, or bug reports!",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "Good Birds",
    "winmsg": "The Good Birds have won the war! The Good can now live in peace! Forever live ~Players~!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Bad Birds",
    "winmsg": "The Evil Birds has won the war! From now on ~Players~ will be leaders of of this new bird world!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Extinct Birds",
    "winmsg": "The Extinct Birds has taken the world...again.~Players~ will now be the rulers of this new bird world. Long live the Extinct Birds!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia3",
    "translation": "Fbirds",
    "winmsg": "The Fbirds...they have taken over the world! The birds now follow the orders of ~Players~!"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "owl",
    "translation": "Owl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a Owl! A wise bird that is nocturnal, because of that you can inspect one person every night using /inspect. ",
    "info": "Can inspect somebody every night. Sided with Good Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 30
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hawk",
    "translation": "Hawk",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a Hawk! A swift and cool bird type /Kill [name] during the day phase to kill someone! You will not be revealed when you kill. You are allied with the Good birds.",
    "info": "Can kill somebody during to day. Sided with Good Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now using /kill [name]. You will not be revealed :",
    "killmsg": "The Hawk fly by and quickly kills ~Target~ and flies away!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "eagle",
    "translation": "Eagle",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a Eagle! With your keen eye you can expose somebody during the day using /expose you will be revealed though.",
    "info": "Can expose one person during the standby (reveals). Sided with Good birds.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "expose": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can type /expose [name] to reveal someone's role!",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ (Eagle) flies above everyone and spotted that ~Target~ is ~Role~!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bald_eagle",
    "translation": "Bald Eagle",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a Bald Eagle! You are loyal you`ll do anything to protect your allies. Use /protect to protect somebody of course!",
    "info": "Can protect somebody every night. Sided with Good Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5,
    "broadcast": "role"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "peafowl",
    "translation": "Peafowl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the Peafowl,the pretty bird, and stuff. Use /distract to distract someone due to your pretty feathers!",
    "info": "Can distract 1 person every night. Sided with Good Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "dove",
    "translation": "Dove",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a Dove! You don`t have any special commands during the night! Vote to remove birds in the day!",
    "info": "Can vote to remove people in the day. Sided with Good Birds.",
    "actions": {}
    },
    {
    "role": "raven",
    "translation": "Raven",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the Raven! You are mysterious so you can stalk someone and see who they visited using /stalk. ",
    "info": "Can stalk one during the night. Sided with Good Birds!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stalk": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 50
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "peregrine_falcon",
    "translation": "Peregrine Falcon",
    "side": "mafia3",
    "help": "You are the Peregrine Falcon, fastest bird in the world, and you can use your kill to outspeed bodyguards! Furthermore, you can't be slowed down by silly distracting birds. Team up with the Flamingo to win!",
    "info": "Killer that outspeeds bodyguards and can be distracted. Sided with Fbirds.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 1,
    "broadcast": "role"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "flamingo",
    "translation": "Flamingo",
    "side": "mafia3",
    "help": "You are pink-bodied bird with a unique beak. However, that's not the only unique thing about you. You have the power to vote anyone off as your vote counts as 9999. Team up with the Peregrine Falcon to win!",
    "info": "Has a vote of 9999. Sided with Fbirds.",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 9999
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "dodo",
    "translation": "Dodo",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are the Dodo! An extinct bird that came back from the past...trying to wipe out the other birds your vote counts as 10.",
    "info": "Has a vote of 10. Sided with Extinct Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "vote": 10
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "elephant_bird",
    "translation": "Elephant Bird",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are an Elephant Bird an extinct animal! Funny right? You aren`t widely known and laughed at so your vote counts as -15",
    "info": "Has a vote of -15. Sided with Extinct Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "vote": -15
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "great_auk",
    "translation": "Great Auk",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are the Great Auk! You are a leader so you get a daykill! This has is not revealed. Lead your team to victory!",
    "info": "Gets a non-revealing daykill. Sided with Extinct Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now using /kill [name]. You will not be revealed :",
    "killmsg": "The Great Auk jumps from the sea and kills ~Target~ ,before they found out who he was the Great Auk jumped back into the sea!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "vulture",
    "translation": "Vulture",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are a dreaded vulture, who feeds mainly off of dead animals. The only way to get a dead animal is to kill one, so you get to do just that, and you do so with a deadly poison! Type /poison to poison someone at night.",
    "info": "Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "night": {
    "poison": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 40,
    "broadcast": "role"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "magpie",
    "translation": "Magpie",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are a tiny magpie, known for its thievery, and in this case, you will be stealing other animals' lives! Type /kill to kill someone at night.",
    "info": "Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 35,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "buzzard",
    "translation": "Buzzard",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are a dreaded buzzard, who feeds mainly off of dead animals. The only way to get a dead animal is to kill one, so you get to do just that! Type /kill to kill someone at night.",
    "info": "Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.",
    "actions": {
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles",
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 35,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    }
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "owl",
    "bald_eagle",
    "peafowl",
    "raven",
    "dove",
    "buzzard",
    "magpie",
    "dove",
    "dove"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "owl",
    "bald_eagle",
    "peafowl",
    "raven",
    "dove",
    "buzzard",
    "vulture",
    "dove",
    "dove",
    "peregrine_falcon",
    "hawk",
    "dove",
    "great_auk",
    "dodo",
    "dove",
    "flamingo"
    ],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "owl",
    "bald_eagle",
    "peafowl",
    "raven",
    "hawk"
    ]
    }
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    How this theme is different:
    This theme is different from other themes is that 1 of the mafia teams mostly rely on votes and the others just kill.Anyways one of the mafia has a daykill like Hades. There is a Klefa/Kuja theme like in FF.Basicly this theme has many backbones
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    Sides and Roles
    Good Birds
    Owl-Can inspect somebody every night. Sided with Good Birds.

    Hawk-Can kill somebody during to day. Sided with Good Birds.

    Eagle-Can expose one person during the standby (reveals). Sided with Good birds.

    Bald Eagle-Can protect somebody every night. Sided with Good Birds.

    Peafowl-Can distract 1 person every night. Sided with Good Birds.

    Raven-Can stalk one during the night. Sided with Good Birds.

    Dove-Can vote to remove people in the day. Sided with Good Birds.


    Fbirds
    Peregrine Falcon-Killer that outspeeds bodyguards and can be distracted. Sided with Fbirds.

    Flamingo-Has a vote of 9999. Sided with Fbirds.


    Extinct Birds
    Dodo-Has a vote of 10. Sided with Extinct Birds.

    Elephant Bird-Has a vote of 10. Sided with Extinct Birds.

    Great Auk-Gets a non-revealing daykill. Sided with Extinct Birds.


    Bad Birds
    Vulture-Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.

    Magpie-Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.

    Buzzard-Shares a nightkill with its team. Sided with Bad Birds.
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    I think everything I need to include is here.
     
  2. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    Decline [1]

    There is nothing special about this theme, the theme has a high minimum players but a low capacity (10-16), really bland village/mafia teams (Even when the theme CAN be played it will be very subpar compared to other themes). In short this contributes nothing to the Mafia channel and shouldn't be accepted.
     
  3. Sky Sentinel

    Sky Sentinel You see?

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    Really weak/bland village, boring kefka/kuja team, ex birds are OP (control any non-kuja'd vote), bad birds is mehhh generic. Kinda flavorful, i guess? but not very exciting
     
  4. Silone

    Silone Kanade <3

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    This theme was just to teach Espeon anyways so i just posted it here if it had a chance oh well

    Its kinda hard to make themes now since of all the new ones over 30
     
  5. Sr Betato

    Sr Betato Sir Betato

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    I Have to agree, Extinct birds are op and a bland village.Overall this theme has no specialty.
     
  6. Sky Sentinel

    Sky Sentinel You see?

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    I mean yeah, no offense to you and Espeon since this was a learning experience, you got all the basics down but unfortunately that's all you got
     
  7. Silone

    Silone Kanade <3

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    If its bad just decline Im doing something else already lol
     
  8. Shazan

    Shazan Obey to Kyubey

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    well you guys can try to change the mechanics of the game and male it better, instead to surrender so fast
     
  9. Roild

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    You could have done that with a test theme for critique or even just for show.

    Uh wat.
    Code (text):
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    2.     "miniplayers": 7,
    3.     "author": [
    4.         "Silone",
    5.         "Espeon"
    6.     ],
    7.     "minplayers": 10,
    8.  
    What's a Fbird? Yeah, the roles are pretty bland and the min/max are really off. Decline [2]
     
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