Mario Party 8

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    {
    "name": "Mario Party 8",
    "author": "Karp Karpity, ScorchedSwords",
    "summary": "Welcome to the party! Mario Party 8 that is!",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "village",
    "winmsg": "The village ~(players)~ saved the party from further harm!"
    },
    {
    "side": "evil",
    "translation": "evil players",
    "winmsg": "The evil ~(players)~ have kicked and scratched their way to victory!"
    },
    {
    "side": "Bowser",
    "translation": "Bowser",
    "winmsg": "The Bowser ~(player)~ has made life hell and won!"
    },
    {
    "side": "Koopa",
    "translation": "Koopa Clan",
    "winmsg": "The koopas ~(players)~ scared you enough, so they won the party!"
    },
    {
    "side": "special",
    "translation": "special stuff",
    "winmsg": "The special effects ~(players)~ got to you."
    },
    {
    "side": "MC",
    "translation": "MC Bellyho",
    "winmsg": "MC Bellyho ~(player)~ bored you to death and won!"
    },
    {
    "side": "ocean",
    "translation": "Ocean",
    "winmsg": "The ocean ~(players)~ made you so sea-sick that they won!"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "samurai",
    "translation": "Mario",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill someone during the day. Try not to hit your fellow villagers.",
    "info": "A samurai on the village that can kill during the day.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can now kill using /kill!",
    "killmsg": "Mario used cashzap candy, and killed ~target~ instantly. How hateful the party can be!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "princess",
    "translation": "Peach",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use /charm [name] to charm someone during the night. You have a 2 vote, so use it wisely.",
    "info": "A hooker on the village. Has a +2 vote, and can charm someone.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "charm": {
    "command": "distract",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 6,
    "distractmsg": "Peach charmed you with her looks all night! You were to busy watching to do anything during the night!",
    "teammsg": "Peach came to your teammate. Since you were engorged with her looks, you forgot to do ~actions~ during the night!"
    }
    },
    "vote": 2
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Boo",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use your 1 vote to help the village win! You may be turned into a coin however.",
    "info": "A villager that may be turned into a coin.",
    "actions": {}
    },
    {
    "role": "bodygaurd",
    "translation": "DK",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use /protect [name] twice to protect 2 people.",
    "info": "The Bodygaurd on the village. Can Protect 2 people.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 3,
    "broadcast": "role",
    "limit": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mayor",
    "translation": "King Boo",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use your 5 /votes to help the village win!",
    "info": "The mayor of the village with 5 votes.",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 5
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "inspector",
    "translation": "Yoshi",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use /inspect to find out someones identity. You may get hax on kills!",
    "info": "The inspector of the village. may also get hax on some kills!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 28
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.3,
    "revealPlayer": 0.15
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "vigilante",
    "translation": "Luigi",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill your enemies.",
    "info": "A killer on the village!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 16,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hooker",
    "translation": "Daisy",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "You /distract [name] to distract someone. You have a -1 vote!",
    "info": "A hooker on the evil side with a -1 vote.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 7,
    "distractmsg": "Daisy played with you all night, and you liked it!!",
    "teammsg": "Daisy came to your teammate. You played with her all night, and forgot to do ~actions~!"
    }
    },
    "vote": -1,
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "poisoner",
    "translation": "Wario",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Use /poison during the night to poison someone. They die after 2 nights!",
    "info": "A poisoner who kills victims after 2 nights.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "poison": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 35,
    "broadcast": "none",
    "limit": 2,
    "count": 2
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "killer",
    "translation": "Waluigi",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill someone during the night!",
    "info": "A killer on the evil side!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "pink",
    "translation": "Birdo",
    "side": "evil",
    "help": "Use /defend [name of teammate] to defend someone from night-time attacks.",
    "info": "A bodygaurd on the evil side.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "defend": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 4,
    "broadcast": "role"
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "Bowser",
    "translation": "Bowser",
    "side": "Bowser",
    "help": "Use /kill twice during the night to kill two people! You inspect as boo, and avoid hax! Good luck and have fun! ",
    "info": " A role that can kill two people during the night! Eats the distractors and avoids hax!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 35,
    "limit": 2
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ChangeTarget",
    "hookermsg": "You tried to distract Bowser(how foolish...) He ate you instead!",
    "msg": "The ~Distracter~ came to you last night! You ate the fool instead!"
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "kill"
    ],
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bill",
    "translation": "Bullet Bill",
    "side": "Bowser",
    "help": "You know who distarcted, inspected, or poisoned you! You can't eb killed during the day because you're super fast!",
    "info": "A role that knows who distracted, inspected, or poisoned Bullet Bill sided with the Bowser",
    "actions": {
    "poison": {
    "mode": "identify",
    "msg": "~Target~ is the mean ~role~ he poisoned you last night!"
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "identify",
    "msg": "~Target~ is the snooping ~Role~ because he distarcted you last night!"
    },
    "inspect": {
    "mode": "identify",
    "msg": "~Target~ is the knowing ~Role~ because he inspected you last night!"
    },
    "daykill": "evade"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "Kamek",
    "translation": "Kamek",
    "side": "Bowser",
    "help": "Use /inspect two times to inspect two people! Give your information to Bowser!",
    "info": "A role thatr can inspect up to two peopel during the night!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 30,
    "limit": 2
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "kuja",
    "translation": "Holly Koopa",
    "side": "Koopa",
    "help": "Use your 9999 votes to vote someone out!",
    "info": "The lone kuja in the game. Sided with the koopas!",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 9999
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "koopa",
    "translation": "Koopa",
    "side": "Koopa",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill someone during the night! Not your teammates I hope?",
    "info": "A killer on the Koopa clan.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 27,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "evader",
    "translation": "Dry Bones",
    "side": "Koopa",
    "help": "You can't be killed during the night or day. Good Luck!",
    "info": "A koopa that basically cannot die! Has a 1 vote!",
    "actions": {
    "kill": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "HB",
    "translation": "Hammerbro",
    "side": "Koopa",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill someone! You avoid hax so you should be killing!",
    "info": "A killer on the Koopa side that avoids hax!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 27,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "kill"
    ],
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "star",
    "translation": "Victory Star",
    "side": "special",
    "help": "Use /illuminate [name] to show everyone who just got a star. It then has a two-day recharge",
    "info": "An awesome role that exposes whoever got the star! sided with the special effects!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "illuminate": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "exposemsg": "Do you want a star for 20 coins? ~Target~ ~Role~ said yes, and paind twenty coins for a star!",
    "recharge": 2
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sugar",
    "translation": "Candy",
    "side": "special",
    "help": "Use /chance to do something special to a target! This is the funnest role I think!",
    "info": "A role that may do something special to a target! Sided with the special effects!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "chance": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "command": {
    "inspect": 0.17,
    "stalk": 0.16,
    "poison": 0.17,
    "distract": 0.16,
    "kill": 0.17,
    "protect": 0.17
    }
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "DB",
    "translation": "Dice Block",
    "side": "special",
    "help": "Use /hit [name] to show who hit the dice block!",
    "info": "An exposer sided with the special effects!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "hit": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "exposemsg": "~target~ ~role~ walked up to the dice block, and hit a 10. S/he then moved ten spaces!"
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "MC",
    "translation": "MC Bellyho",
    "side": "MC",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "help": "Use /announce [name] to announce what role he/she is! You are a consp, so go get em!",
    "info": "A consp that can expose someone during the day!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "announce": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ aka MC Bellyho walked up to ~target~ and shouted that he was the treacherous ~role~!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "human",
    "translation": "Pirate",
    "side": "ocean",
    "help": "Use /kill [name] to kill someone during the night! Shared with your team!",
    "info": "A killer opn the ocean team",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "fish",
    "translation": "Dolphin",
    "side": "ocean",
    "help": "Use /distract to distract someone with your cuteness and playfulness!",
    "info": "A distractor on the ocean side!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 9,
    "distractmsg": "You were too busyn riding the dolphin to perform ~actions~ during the night.",
    "teammsg": "You and your partner decided to ride the dolphin instead of your ~actions~ during the night."
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "captain",
    "translation": "Captain Goomba",
    "side": "ocean",
    "help": "You have 8 votes, and can kill(shared).",
    "info": "A killer on the ocean side that has 8 votes. Its kills are shared.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "vote": 8,
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "squid",
    "translation": "Blooper",
    "side": "ocean",
    "help": "Use /protect to protect someone, preferably Captain Goomba!",
    "info": "A protector on the ocean side. It has a vote of -3.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 7,
    "broadcast": "role"
    }
    },
    "vote": -3,
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "inspector",
    "killer",
    "villager",
    "star",
    "koopa",
    "villager",
    "MC",
    "human",
    "mayor",
    "bodygaurd"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "inspector",
    "killer",
    "villager",
    "star",
    "koopa",
    "villager",
    "MC",
    "human",
    "mayor",
    "bodygaurd",
    "hooker",
    "vigilante",
    "sugar",
    "evader",
    "villager",
    "fish",
    "princess",
    "villager",
    "pink",
    "Bowser"
    ],
    "roles3": [
    "inspector",
    "killer",
    "villager",
    "star",
    "koopa",
    "villager",
    "MC",
    "human",
    "mayor",
    "bodygaurd",
    "hooker",
    "vigilante",
    "sugar",
    "evader",
    "villager",
    "fish",
    "princess",
    "villager",
    "pink",
    "Bowser",
    "villager",
    "DB",
    "villager",
    "HB",
    "villager",
    "captain",
    "samurai",
    "poisoner",
    "kuja",
    "squid"
    ],
    "roles4": [
    "inspector",
    "killer",
    "villager",
    "star",
    "koopa",
    "villager",
    "MC",
    "human",
    "villager",
    "mayor",
    "bodygaurd",
    "villager",
    "Kamek",
    "princess",
    "vigilante",
    "sugar",
    "evader",
    "villager",
    "fish",
    "villager",
    "bill",
    "hooker",
    "villager",
    "pink",
    "Bowser",
    "villager",
    "DB",
    "villager",
    "HB",
    "villager",
    "captain",
    "villager",
    "samurai",
    "poisoner",
    "kuja",
    "squid"
    ],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "samurai",
    "princess",
    "inspector",
    "mayor",
    "bodygaurd",
    "vigilante"
    ],
    "killmsg": "Shy Guy: ~(player)~ ~(role)~ had to leave the party for unknown reasons.",
    "killusermsg": "You left the party and got beat up! I guess, you had too much beer?",
    "lynchmsg": "~(player)~ ~(role)~ had ~count~ haters, so he was angry and left!",
    "border": "<^>^<^>^<^>^<^>^<^>^<^>^<^>***",
    "minplayers": 8,
    "ticks": {
    "standby": 30,
    "night": 30
    }
    }

    Roles and what they do!
    Mario- samurai on the village
    VILLAGE
    Yoshi- inspector and spy
    DK- bodyguard can protect 2 people during the night
    boo- villager
    King boo- mayor
    Peach- pretty lady with 2 votes
    luigi- vigilante

    EVIL
    daisy- bad pretty lady with -1 vote
    waluigi- can kill once during the night
    birdo- can protect one person during the night
    wario- can poison someone during the night

    BOWSER
    bowser- can kill 2 people during the night! avoids hax and kills plers! So he's werewolf!
    Bullet Bill- knows who inspected, distracted, or poisoned him/her
    Kamek- inspects two people during the night

    SPECIAL STUFF!
    Candy- can kill, poison, inspect, distract, stalk, or protect someone!
    Dice Block- exposes someone during the day! user is not revealed!
    Star- exposes someone during the day! Has to wait two nights to expose again! User is not revealed

    KOOPAS
    koopa- can kill someone during the night! shared with teammates
    Holly Koopa- a koopa with 9999 votes, since she is rich!
    Dry Bones- can't be killed! Only voted out!
    Hammerbro- can kill someone during the night! Avoids hax, so he should be killing!

    OCEAN SIDE!
    Pirate- can kill someone during the night. Shared with his teammates!
    Dolphin- distracts someone during the night!
    Captain Ganoob- 8 votes, and can kill someone during the night(shared)
    Blooper- can kill someone during the night, shared with his teammates! Also has a -3 vote!

    CONSPIRATOR!
    MC Bellyho- exposes someone during the day! Wins with any side!

    PRIORITY!
    [1] Candy (Chance)
    [3] DK (Protect)
    [4] Birdo (Defend)
    [6] Peach (Charm)
    [7] Daisy (Distract)
    [7] Blooper (Protect)
    [9] Dolphin (Distract)
    [15] Waluigi (Kill)
    [15] Pirate (Kill)
    [15] Captain Goomba (Kill)
    [16] Luigi (Kill)
    [27] Koopa (Kill)
    [27] Hammerbro (Kill)
    [28] Yoshi (Inspect)
    [30] Kamek (Inspect)
    [35] Wario (Poison)
    [35] Bowser (Kill)

    SPAWN!
    Yoshi (inspector)
    Waluigi (killer)
    Boo (villager)
    Victory Star (star)
    Koopa (koopa)
    Boo (villager)
    MC Bellyho (MC)
    Pirate (human)
    King Boo (mayor)
    DK (bodygaurd)


    List 2 (11~20 players):

    Yoshi (inspector)
    Waluigi (killer)
    Boo (villager)
    Victory Star (star)
    Koopa (koopa)
    Boo (villager)
    MC Bellyho (MC)
    Pirate (human)
    King Boo (mayor)
    DK (bodygaurd)
    Daisy (hooker)
    Luigi (vigilante)
    Candy (sugar)
    Dry Bones (evader)
    Boo (villager)
    Dolphin (fish)
    Peach (princess)
    Boo (villager)
    Birdo (pink)
    Bowser (Bowser)


    List 3 (21~30 players):

    Yoshi (inspector)
    Waluigi (killer)
    Boo (villager)
    Victory Star (star)
    Koopa (koopa)
    Boo (villager)
    MC Bellyho (MC)
    Pirate (human)
    King Boo (mayor)
    DK (bodygaurd)
    Daisy (hooker)
    Luigi (vigilante)
    Candy (sugar)
    Dry Bones (evader)
    Boo (villager)
    Dolphin (fish)
    Peach (princess)
    Boo (villager)
    Birdo (pink)
    Bowser (Bowser)
    Boo (villager)
    Dice Block (DB)
    Boo (villager)
    Hammerbro (HB)
    Boo (villager)
    Captain Goomba (captain)
    Mario (samurai)
    Wario (poisoner)
    Holly Koopa (kuja)
    Blooper (squid)


    List 4 (31~36 players):

    Yoshi (inspector)
    Waluigi (killer)
    Boo (villager)
    Victory Star (star)
    Koopa (koopa)
    Boo (villager)
    MC Bellyho (MC)
    Pirate (human)
    Boo (villager)
    King Boo (mayor)
    DK (bodygaurd)
    Boo (villager)
    Kamek (Kamek)
    Peach (princess)
    Luigi (vigilante)
    Candy (sugar)
    Dry Bones (evader)
    Boo (villager)
    Dolphin (fish)
    Boo (villager)
    Bullet Bill (bill)
    Daisy (hooker)
    Boo (villager)
    Birdo (pink)
    Bowser (Bowser)
    Boo (villager)
    Dice Block (DB)
    Boo (villager)
    Hammerbro (HB)
    Boo (villager)
    Captain Goomba (captain)
    Boo (villager)
    Mario (samurai)
    Wario (poisoner)
    Holly Koopa (kuja)
    Blooper (squid)

    Edits
    http://pastebin.com/QCqYAnrY To fix citro's mistakes and to fix typos


    Any improvements???? Is it balanced?
     
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2013
  2. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    ~(players)~ isn't an identifier. Neither is ~(player)~ or ~actions~, and I'm pretty sure ~role~ needs a capital letter too. There are typos like "distarcted", "someones" and "bodygaurd" throughout so you'll want to fix them. Blooper's help text doesn't mention his -3 vote, you have various instances of ~target~ ~role~ which would be nice punctuated with brackets and capitals, and Koopa's help doesn't need the "teammates" part because he has team reveal. Dry Bones is told he evades daykills but I don't think you coded that in. You can't just say "MC Bellyho is a conspirator, he won't die," because his existence is really annoying to whichever side he decides to screw over, so I'm not sure he will work as a role.

    At the moment this theme just seems pretty poorly thought out and unbalanced. The village have a total of 7 unique roles, which is ridiculous when you picture the games of 20+, even 30+ possible in the code. The village isn't very special at all - you have a samurai, vigilante, hooker, bodyguard, villager, mayor, and inspector to go with which has nothing particularly original that stands out. Games of 8 players are a joke; your village is literally an inspector and two villagers, while there are 4 different fucking mafia sides, one which will literally never win on its own, and another conspirator making it a total of two exposes. At games of like ~15 the village is a little better, but there's still a killfest after the first night likely taking down the BG and the inspector can't claim because of the rogue hooker. I'm not sure why roles1 and roles2 are separate when the roles only start changing after 20 players.

    This theme just seems like chaos, but unlike Rotom etc it's not really "fun" per se as it's just too difficult to win for most people involved. The ridiculous amount of night and day actions takes away any strategy that could've been had. I've liked your other themes but this one's flavor even is nearly the same as Black Mage's Mario and I don't see it having a lot of potential. sorry!

    edit: yeah, this doesn't seem to be being worked on anymore. Decline [1]
     
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  3. Karp Karpity

    Karp Karpity Active Member

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    anything else I can work on? Or shall i try to work on another theme?
    aka BUMP [1]
     
  4. Hey Day

    Hey Day Argumentum ad ignorantium

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    Decline [2]

    We were testing this and we didn't see any of the fixes citro requested. I can't really accept it with that in mind.
     
  5. Karp Karpity

    Karp Karpity Active Member

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    Okay give me a chance
    Nice changes btw
     
  6. Fuzzysqurl

    Fuzzysqurl baa baa mareep I do what I want Server Owner Developer I do what I want Server Owner Developer

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    It's been about 2 weeks and nothing much has changed. I was hoping an update would come, but I can't wait forever.

    Some things I noticed:
    Koopas are OP, there's a role that can only be lynched, but the team controls the vote
    Bowser killing 2 people plus having a team, including a double inspector seems rather overpowered too.

    For those reasons, and the ones citro stated:
    Decline [3]
     
  7. MewtwoHidden

    MewtwoHidden My Hax Makes Me Famous

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    I notice a lot, ALOT of anesthetic errors.

    1. Peach is told she can /charm, but what does /charm do?
    2. King Boo being sided with the village makes NO sense
    3."exposemsg": "Do you want a star for 20 coins? ~Target~ ~Role~ said yes, and paid twenty coins for a star!",
    SHOULD BE
    "exposemsg": "Do you want a star for 20 coins? ~Target~, who goes by ~Role~ said 'yes', and paid 20 coins for a star!",
    4. Basicly everything Citro had said

    There are 3 Exposes which seems a bit excessive. But I do think this theme uses some lesser used commands such as
    "action": {
    "mode":"identify"

    I would Recommend aking this to Theme Critique and Improvement where we would be happy to help you get this theme Review ready :]
     
  8. Scene

    Scene reverie

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    "Peach came to your teammate. Since you were engorged with her looks, you forgot to do ~actions~ during the night!"

    I think you meant to type engaged? Although enthralled would probably be a better word grammar-wise.
     
  9. Roild

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    I was also waiting around for some changes that Citro and others pointed out, but nothing happened. I'm going to Decline [4] based on inactivity.
     
  10. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    Why didn't you just update the original pastebin?
    Also, you should link to the RAW.

    The ocean side seems to be the strongest in my opinion.
    I feel like you are missing some important roles. I am not familiar with the game though.
    To many sides for my liking.
    The special side has 2 expose and that is not a good thing. Also, wouldn't them being on the village side be better and make more sense?
    There might be to many kills as well.

    If someone already said all this then sorry.

    Decline [5]
     
  11. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    Decline [6] Inactive author means no future for this theme.
     
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  12. N the Great

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    Your Code seem'd to be problemo, that's why the mafia QC's had to decline, Better Luck next time :D
     
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