Cursed

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  1. Millager

    Millager New Member

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    Hey guys just a theme that was here before V2 came and thought I'd bring it back up. It works (I made sure of it myself) and just needs the review. :D

    http://pastebin.com/ZkbpFGDP

    I made it MONTHS ago (so this description might suck) but it still works like a charm. The whole point of the curse it kinda like an undead or mutant curse spreading to a few civilians causing them to want to slaughter everything. Same goes for the ghosts with the exception of killing the ghosts will just pass them on to afterlife. The theme itself was based on supernatural happenings in fantasy novels. (Inspector being a psychic, a seductress [Or succubus] for a PL and the Tigerbloods are a personal add on. A superpowered and supernatural trio that can work together to become a strong force. Black Mage is the godfather in this case being more of a gag character who can't be nightkilled but leaving him vulnerable to votes and daykill.

    If you don't like the description above let me know... I'm a forum newb XD I can let you know of anything I missed.


    Regards,

    Gabrielle.
     
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  2. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    This seems to be a reskin of default.
    Minor errors found in your script:

    Your role mafia2 avoids hax from an inexistent kill night action.
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    You had an error in the mafia checker that needs to be fixed.
     
  3. Fuzzysqurl

    Fuzzysqurl baa baa mareep I do what I want Server Owner Developer I do what I want Server Owner Developer

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    Things I noticed:

    You have an empty Village Cant Lose Roles
    As stated by Beast, it is pretty bland
    Your Gabrielle role seems a bit overpowered, and biased.
    Your authors section will prevent you from updating the theme at all. Use "["name1", "name2", and so on]",
    Your black mage role has 2 modes for the same action. I think the 2nd one overrides the first, but if not, you will (possibly?) have a Theme Error in the first one due to "killermsg" being returned as an invalid string.


    Oh, and the theme description makes it seem like the bad guys can convert/curse (Re: "The whole point of the curse it kinda like an undead or mutant curse spreading to a few civilians causing them to want to slaughter everything")
     
  4. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    I'll give this a look once you have fixed the issues that Fuzzy mentioned.
     
  5. Millager

    Millager New Member

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    I'll take some looks into these. The conversion is a good idea and I SHOULD work that in. Probably will. Ghosts will retain the ability to kill though. I will nerf Gabrielle to a daykiller and revenge daykiller (But not ignoring daykills). I'll look into the Black Mage bit but as it has been MONTHS since I've even worked on a script it may take some time.
     
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