On Wiki [secret]{{pokeheader}} {{TOC}} ==General== -Good hazard layer -Not many options -Some other shit I’ll add later ==Hazards == {{set | name = Hazards | item = Oran Berry/Eviolite | ability = Sturdy | nature1 = Jolly | ev = 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spd | level = 5 | move1 = Stealth Rock | move2 = Spikes | move3 = Rock Blast | move4 = X-Scissor/Earthquake }} - Max speed makes it easier to get SR and one layer of spikes up - Rock Blast too for STAB, also beats subs - X-Scissor hits Slowpoke, Bronzor for some damage, Lileep - Earthquake hits Chinchou and Magnemite notably ==DWEBBLE SMASH == {{set | name = Shell Smash | item = Oran Berry | ability = Sturdy | nature = Adamant | ev = 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spd | level = 5 | move1 = Shell Smash | move2 = Earthquake | move3 = Rock Blast | move4 = X-Scissor/Stealth Rock }} - Has a nice surprise to it -Hits very hard, gets up to 34 attack after one boost -X-Scissor and SR is a matter of preference, whether you need it to set up SR or get extra coverage -Rock Blast and eq cover most threats -Jolly isn’t necessary, after one smash it outspeeds anything but scarfed diglett, elekid, or voltorb - Oran berry is preferred for the healing it gives ==Checks + Counters== -Bronzor can switch in and 2hko with Flash Cannon, OHKOing after a smash -Natu can bounce back SR and spikes, though it has to be wary of Rock Blast on the predicted switch in -Depending on the coverage move on the hazard set, there are a lot of switch ins -Ferroseed can switch in on anything and kill with gyro ball ==Other Options== -Eviolite can be used over oran for the defense, though oran is preferred -Knock Off could be used as the last move on the hazard set, but the extra coverage is generally better k, finally did this, I am really tired atm, so it is probably full of errors and things I forgot, but it is done![/secret]
Referring to: this should split into two i.e. item = oran berry item1 = eviolite Yhere are a few of these errors. I hope you fix it, nice skeleton though.
Looks good, needs a few added extras and the kind of things MX mentioned. Drilbur is a pretty good check. Staryu donks the hazard set in every way possible, even having the 30% burn chance and spin. Looks good, could probably write this.
I would still slash in evolite with the shell smash set as it helps it more against priority even after the smash it has the equivalent of 0 defense boosts.
Yeah, I was actually going to not slash it in on either set, and mention it in OO, but I forgot to take it off of the hazard set.
Alright, I wrote it up and it is on the wiki, I invite anyone who knows what they are doing to go and clean it up, I am no Shakespeare. (read: my writing sucks)