This progressed nicely. I'm in agreement with Samphire about the theme name though, as it really has only one team that has to do with the internet and the rest generally about computer protection. Approved [4], pending a different name for the theme.
I'm a new QC member so I can review this. The teams do seem balanced from what I can see which is a good thing. I especially like the idea of corrupted power roles, it adds a new strategy to Mafia. I do think the virus is a little OP and the Adware a bit underpowered. People wouldn't have much fun as Adware, so you may want to spice up that role. I also agree with Meowmix and Samphire, only one team has really anything to do with the internet. A name change, perhaps "Computer Security" for example. But it's up to you at the end of the day. This theme has clearly made great progress and I am going to give it my Approve [5].
Thank you for the approves and for reviewing!!! :o I'm thinking about calling the theme "Computer", what do you think? It'd be a short and simple name. I like "Computer Security" too, although is longer.
Changed theme's name to PC. Could a mod change the thread name to something like "PC (old Internet)" or similar, please? (I can't change it, or idk how to do it >_>)
With a new name for your theme, you should update the theme's summary :) Other than this, I think it is nice for it to be approved [6] now.
UPDATE, based on the testing: -Now the border is shorter. -SPAM selfprotect fail chance is 30% now instead of 50%. -Changed the roles list: I deleted some malware in medium games and changed it for Viral Videos (Friday...), because Malware was OP and Viral Videos UP (well, also in the two games that Nyan Cat appeared he died n1, lol) -Added the broadcast message for Trojan's kill.
I like this theme. <--- that'd be a cool post by itself huh? Haha. Please read through your theme after completion and/or making edits. Check for grammar and punctuation (code). This way you can prevent repeatedly being asked to fix the same things. Maybe I should put this somewhere official since it applies to everybody. Anyway. Do the above. Your miller has a different message from the villagers, so they'll be able to tell themselves apart. I spotted some other things that needed fixing but I'm sure they'll be spotted if you do a run through. Not a quick one, a thorough one.
Well, I finally located Angel Flonne, so he'll fix the grammar/punctuation problems (I made the code, he wrote the text) I solved the miller info message problem. This'll be updated soon. :)
Very small grammar check. Spoiler "role":"cinspector", "translation":"Corrupted Spybot S&D", "side":"village", "help":"Oh no! A virus corrupted your identification files! Also, your inspect function was affected, but seems you can still do it! But by careful, since your inspects will only be true 50% of the time! Also, you'll die in 3 turns if McAfee doesn't repair you!", "info":"Can inspect 1 player during the night with fail chance (50% of true, 25% of Trojan, 25% of Virus) Dies in 3 turns. Sided with the Users.", "actions":{ "initialCondition":{ "poison":{ "count":3, "poisonDeadMessage":"Your files were corrupted!" } }, "night":{ "inspect":{ "target":"AnyButSelf", "common":"Self", "priority":14, "Sight":{ "true":0.5, "trojan":0.25, "virus":0.25 } } } } }, { "role":"miller", "translation":"Malwarebytes", "side":"village", "help":"You're a simple Internet User who wanna surf the Internet. Use your vote wisely to help the Antivirus! Also, you may get some hax on kills!", "info":"Vote counts as 1. Small chance of hax on kills. Sided with the Users.", "actions":{ "inspect":{ But it seems you can still do it, BE careful and wants to, not wanna.[/hide] #GrammarNazi #StayNazi P.S. It's the same with Internet User as with Malb, just cba to paste it in.
Fixed the grammar bugs that TSO reported!! Thanks for your review! And also thanks for the approve, BC! Angel will abbreviate the summary. :)
I guess there is no much need to shorten it. Do it if you really can and want to. But, since the theme name was changed, you'd change the 2 firsts sentences of that summary.
Going to Approve [8]. 2 things come to mind, I don't think the programs themselves would know that they were corrupted so in keeping with the flavor you could have them not know when they were converted although it would probably make it really chaotic. I'm not a big fan of coinflips in mafia so I'd personally prefer the failure rates to be dropped for the corrupted software probably to something like 30%. That's mostly a balancing issue though and can be looked at later. The other thing is it's kind of ironic that McAfee is the priest considering recent events involving John McAfee.
Coming on a theme pretty late once again (because I'm not having time), and as usual the other QC already seem to have shaped it up. Going to back Water on his concerns, but giving my approval.
@ Water: Thanks for reviewing and the approve! :) Of course, if balance isn't ok I'll change the failure rates. About McAfee: LOL. @Zzyzx Road: Aww, you already approved the theme :< But anyway thank you for reviewing (another time xd) !! Maybe the change of the theme's name is the cause of the confusion.
I remember being on to test this theme, and it was actually very enjoyable. It was one of the most fun themes I played in a while. Anyways, the only thing I have to add on is, are corrupted programs aware of their new "conditions" so to speak? As in, given the case of spybot, is the new spybot told he is an insane inspector? If so, that almost defeats the fun of an insane inspector, and I feel it would be better to leave that out. Ofc, once played after a while people will catch on, but I'm not sure there's much anyone can do about that. I thoroughly enjoyed testing this, whenever that was, and found it to be overall balanced. Approved (9) Good job, only one more (I think? don't quote me on that lol) to go!
(11:31:58) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (11:31:58) ±Game: A new PC-themed mafia game was started at #Mafia! (11:31:58) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (11:53:57) *************************************************************************************** (11:53:57) ±Game: A new History-themed mafia game was started at #Mafia! (11:53:57) *************************************************************************************** (10:54:35) *** mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag *** (10:54:35) ±Game: A new Minesweeper-themed mafia game was started at #Mafia! (10:54:35) *** mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag mine mine flag *** The border is still rather long. Looking at a default "*" border and the minesweeper border helps point that out. In fact, on my screen it took up 1.5 lines just for the border. Granted, I'm not using a maximized window, but I think a shorter border would look better and spam less.
Spoiler (01:21:40) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:21:40) Times Up! : (01:21:40) The Roles have been Decided! : (01:21:40) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Norton, Spybot S&D, Trojan. (01:21:40) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Huntahs, Lanthanum, Praixie, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:21:40) Time: Night 1 (01:21:40) Make your moves, you only have 30 seconds! : (01:21:40) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:21:45) Lanthanum: :o (01:21:50) Pikachu-Fan joined the channel. (01:21:53) Praixie: am i noodles? (01:21:53) e to the x: I saw "WWW" and became sad (01:21:56) Praixie: nope (01:21:56) Wasabi121: there is literally one bad guy (01:21:58) ChaosPenguin: Awww Huntahs is gonna die :( (01:21:58) e to the x: I miss WWW :( (01:22:00) Wasabi121: trojan is so fucked (01:22:01) Praixie: insp here (01:22:06) Lanthanum: Noodlez died (01:22:09) ChaosPenguin: Yay (01:22:10) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:22:10) Times Up! : (01:22:10) ±WWW: Huntahs (Norton) has disappeared from the Web! (01:22:10) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:22:10) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Spybot S&D, Trojan. (01:22:10) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Praixie, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:22:10) Time: Day 1 (01:22:10) You have 30 seconds to debate who are the bad guys! : (01:22:10) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:22:17) Praixie: O.o (01:22:26) ChaosPenguin: Malware killed him :( (01:22:40) Lanthanum: oh (01:22:41) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:22:41) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Spybot S&D, Trojan. (01:22:41) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Praixie, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:22:41) Time: Day 1 (01:22:41) It's time to vote someone off, type /Vote [name], you only have 30 seconds! : (01:22:41) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:22:42) Lanthanum: interesting (01:22:48) Lanthanum: this theme doesn't have a PL at this amount of players :o (01:22:54) Praixie: well (01:23:12) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:12) Times Up! : (01:23:12) No one was voted off! : (01:23:12) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:12) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Spybot S&D, Trojan. (01:23:12) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Praixie, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:23:12) Time: Night 2 (01:23:12) Make your moves, you only have 30 seconds! : (01:23:12) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:12) Praixie: lol (01:23:14) ChaosPenguin: The Trojan has such a disadvantage (01:23:24) ChaosPenguin: It's like 5-1 (01:23:32) Wasabi121: FYI, don't trust ChaosPenguin hax (01:23:34) Praixie: i'm dying this night but i'm cleaning e^x (01:23:42) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:42) Times Up! : (01:23:42) ±WWW: Praixie (Spybot S&D) has disappeared from the Web! (01:23:42) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:42) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Trojan. (01:23:42) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:23:42) Time: Day 2 (01:23:42) You have 30 seconds to debate who are the bad guys! : (01:23:42) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:23:52) Lanthanum: wait :o (01:23:58) Lanthanum: there was only 1 mafia o.o (01:24:02) ChaosPenguin: Yeah lol (01:24:04) Lanthanum: 6 player game (01:24:06) Lanthanum: um... (01:24:11) Lanthanum: how does the author expect them to win? (01:24:13) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:24:13) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Trojan. (01:24:13) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:24:13) Time: Day 2 (01:24:13) It's time to vote someone off, type /Vote [name], you only have 30 seconds! : (01:24:13) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:24:17) ChaosPenguin: Carefully lol (01:24:29) Wasabi121: no vote at 4 we could (01:24:31) Lanthanum: if default was changed to that (01:24:38) Lanthanum: I wonder what would happen.. (01:24:39) Wasabi121: but then e to the x the only clean guy (01:24:42) Wasabi121: will die (01:24:45) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:24:45) Times Up! : (01:24:45) No one was voted off! : (01:24:45) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:24:45) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Trojan. (01:24:45) Current Players: ChaosPenguin, Lanthanum, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:24:45) Time: Night 3 (01:24:45) Make your moves, you only have 30 seconds! : (01:24:45) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:24:45) ChaosPenguin: Oooo Wasabi121 is being yoda lol (01:24:46) Wasabi121: and we will get nowhere (01:24:47) e to the x: Huh? (01:24:48) e to the x: yeah, that (01:24:56) e to the x: lanth is mal (01:24:59) e to the x: chaos dying (01:25:02) ChaosPenguin: Awww :( (01:25:04) ChaosPenguin: its Wasabi121 (01:25:09) ChaosPenguin: no (01:25:10) ChaosPenguin: its (01:25:11) Lanthanum: wat (01:25:16) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:25:16) Times Up! : (01:25:16) ±WWW: ChaosPenguin (Internet User) has disappeared from the Web! (01:25:16) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:25:16) Current Roles: Internet User, Malwarebytes, Trojan. (01:25:16) Current Players: Lanthanum, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:25:16) Time: Day 3 (01:25:16) You have 30 seconds to debate who are the bad guys! : (01:25:16) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:25:16) e to the x: Lanth is mal... (01:25:19) Wasabi121: right (01:25:21) Wasabi121: gg Lanthanum (01:25:26) Lanthanum: what (01:25:28) Lanthanum: 3 haxing roles (01:25:30) Lanthanum: and an inspector (01:25:37) e to the x: Wait, malware is... good? (01:25:43) Lanthanum: and a BG (01:25:46) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:25:46) Current Roles: Internet User, Malwarebytes, Trojan. (01:25:47) Current Players: Lanthanum, Wasabi121, e to the x. (01:25:47) Time: Day 3 (01:25:47) It's time to vote someone off, type /Vote [name], you only have 30 seconds! : (01:25:47) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:25:47) e to the x: wtf (01:25:48) ±Game:Wasabi121 voted for Lanthanum! (01:25:52) Lanthanum: vs. 1 killer (01:25:53) Lanthanum: que? (01:25:55) Wasabi121: malware is miller (01:25:55) ±Game:Lanthanum voted for Wasabi121! (01:25:57) e to the x: Saying it's a "malware" is not a good thing (01:25:59) ±Game:e to the x voted for Wasabi121! (01:26:00) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (01:26:00) Times Up! : (01:26:00) ±Game: Wasabi121 (Trojan) was removed from the game! (01:26:00) The Malware (Lanthanum) infected your computer and now they control all your private information!! (01:26:00) ±Game: The Users (e to the x) lose! (01:26:00) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW[/HIDE] Game is way unbalanced w/6 people. I suppose you can say that with most themes but it's really noticeable here. Is there any way you can fix this?
Spoiler Malwarebytes being village and one of the sides being called Malware also confused a user when they got hax on Malware killing... perhaps make that less confusing?
Spoiler (17:48:39) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (17:48:39) Times Up! : (17:48:39) The Roles have been Decided! : (17:48:39) ±Game: You are a Trojan! (17:48:39) ±Game: You're a Trojan, one of the most well known Malware! Use /kill during the night in order to destroy the program files! (17:48:39) ±Game: Your team is Praixie (Trojan), wussupwussup (Trojan) and Metal Sonic (Worm). (17:48:39) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Norton, Spybot S&D, Trojan, Trojan, Worm. (17:48:39) Current Players: Metal Sonic, Ms. Pickle, Pikachu-Fan, Praixie, Python, TGMTEL, imOnAboat., wussupwussup. (17:48:39) Current Team: Trojan, Trojan, Worm (17:48:39) Time: Night 1 (17:48:39) Make your moves, you only have 30 seconds! : (17:48:39) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (17:48:40) Praixie: it's windows if you wanna be paint (17:48:43) imOnAboat.: oh (17:48:47) Ms. Pickle: I'm an Internet User. (17:48:49) Ms. Pickle: (Haxy Villager) (17:48:56) Pikachu-Fan: internet user (17:48:57) ±WWW: Your teammate (Worm) have decided to delete Python! (17:49:03) ±WWW: Your teammate (Trojan) have decided to kill Pikachu-Fan! (17:49:08) Pikachu-Fan: wussup bad (17:49:08) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (17:49:08) Times Up! : (17:49:08) ±WWW: Pikachu-Fan (Internet User) has disappeared from the Web! (17:49:08) ±WWW: Python (Spybot S&D) has disappeared from the Web! (17:49:08) The Malware (Praixie, wussupwussup and Metal Sonic) infected your computer and now they control all your private information!! (17:49:08) ±Game: The Users (Ms. Pickle, TGMTEL and imOnAboat.) lose! (17:49:08) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW[/HIDE] Game ending at one night. I thought Worm was suppose to not know those trojans so a there's a chance for a good xfire?? they are 3 in a group at small numbers...
Semi large bump here, but can you PLEASE lower the hax rates? They're way too high; most of the time, town gets hax on baddies faster than they can vote them out!
Hax reduced. Also minplayers is now 8, I think (this was modified weeks ago because of the unbalanced small games; I forgot to post it, sorry)
Spoiler (12:42:25) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (12:42:25) Times Up! : (12:42:25) The Roles have been Decided! : (12:42:25) Current Roles: Internet User, Internet User, Malwarebytes, Norton, Spybot S&D, Trojan, Trojan, Worm. (12:42:25) Current Players: Ascarotte, Coolredpanda10, Day Healer, Eaglegolf, Endymion, Phanpy7266, Sam I Am, Severa. (12:42:25) Time: Night 1 (12:42:25) Make your moves, you only have 30 seconds! : (12:42:25) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (12:42:42) Ascarotte: eaglegolf is malware (12:42:44) Ascarotte: killing me (12:42:44) Day Healer: im malware (12:42:46) Day Healer: bytes (12:42:49) Eaglegolf: yep (12:43:06) Phanpy7266: :o (12:43:07) Severa: lol (12:43:09) Day Healer: testing lag (12:43:12) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW (12:43:12) Times Up! : (12:43:12) ±WWW: Severa (Internet User) has disappeared from the Web! (12:43:12) ±WWW: Phanpy7266 (Spybot S&D) has disappeared from the Web! (12:43:12) The Malware (Coolredpanda10, Endymion and Eaglegolf) infected your computer and now they control all your private information!! (12:43:12) ±Game: The Users (Ascarotte, Sam I Am and Day Healer) lose! (12:43:12) ***WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW @@@ WWW [/HIDE] I disabled your theme because of it taking only a night to end. Please fix this.
Theme removed. If Cat Fart no longer wishes to work on this, someone can adopt it and fix it to meet current standards.