Wild West

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    I made this theme because I wanted to see people having fun with another theme and hopefully this theme will fulfill that need for fun! :)

    Description of what the roles do:
    Village
    Bait - Bomb
    Citizen - Villager with small hax
    Cowboy - Bg
    Cowgirl - Pl
    Daisy Duke - safeguard+bg
    Enraged Cowgirl - Pl with /kill when cowboy dies.
    Enraged Cowboy - Bg with /kill when cowgirl dies.
    Hero of thewest - Daykiller (revealed)
    Mayor - Has 4 votes
    Town Crier - Exposer/fake exposer, sided with villager, but will win with anyone.
    Vigilante - Daykiller (not revealed)
    Witness - Spy with a bigger chance at hax
    sherrif - uses /stalk
    tumbleweed kid- Has 0 votes and can't die during the night. Aerith Like role

    The village is trying to protect their town from being robbed or from going into the hands of Billy the Kid or the Indians because they were the first one's here, so they deserve the land!
    Outlaws:
    Bandit - Seperate killer with a chance to dodge nightkills (25%)
    Outlaw - Seperate killer

    Due to wanting money and this town is stocked full of money, they have decided to steal it! None of these guys want to go out in the day due to wanting to hide in the shadows for a better chance of not being caught.

    billy the kid:
    Billy the Kid - Kefka-type role

    Billy the Kid is looking to get some money so he can be rich! Due to being a famous robber he is able to kill anyone without being distracted!
    Indians:
    Chief Run with Moose - Daykiller
    Indian - nightkiller

    The Indians are mad that these new settlers have taken over their land, can they get back their land even though they are a small group?
    Bartender:
    Bartender - Uses /poison to poison people, but will win with anyone.

    The bartender wants more money, which is why he is able to win with anyone if they bribe him! If anyone tries to cheat him by paying less than what is priced than he will pour poison in that person's drink.
    Random side role:
    Sneaky - Will be able to use /stalk and will appear on Billy the Kid's or Indian's team.

    Sneaky is basically a lone bandit that is willing to go on Billy the kid's or Indian's team because they seem to be some of the best people that will allow him to get some of the money if they choose to take it or part of the land![/HIDE]

    Original Code:
    {
    "name": "Wild West",
    "author": "<b><font color=pink>LadyHoliday</font></b>",
    "summary": "Howdy! You have traveled to the wild west. Its a duel of the Wild west, where The Cowboys are fighting the Outlaws and trying to keep the town safe, as the Indians strive to steal back and keep the Land! The bartender can with anyone, due to the fact that anyone will gladly give him enough money to bribe him into going to your side! Thanks to Black Mage for helping to spruce this theme up! ^^",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Indians",
    "winmsg": "The Indians, ~Players~, have won back the land, now you all have to leave this town!"
    },
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "village",
    "winmsg": "The village, ~Players~, have saved this town! Give them a yeehaw for what they have done!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Outlaws",
    "winmsg": "The Outlaws, ~Players~, have won! Now this is a robber town, better get out before anything happens!"
    },
    {
    "side": "Seller",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "winmsg": "The Bartender, ~Players~, have won! How did this happen though?"
    },
    {
    "side": "jhonson",
    "translation": "Mr. Johnson",
    "winmsg": "Mr. Johnson,~Players~, have won! Since he was the CEO of a mining town, this land is only for miners so either run or stay here and become a miner! "
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "mayor",
    "translation": "Mayor",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town mayor! You have four votes because you are the mayor of a small town! ",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 4
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "spy",
    "translation": "Witness",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Due to you not being able to sleep you walk around during the night to see if anything happens!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.3,
    "revealPlayer": 0.11
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl",
    "translation": "Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowgirl! Use /distract to make someone not able to use their command. ",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowboy": "cowboy2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowboy becomes enraged that the cowgirl died!'"
    },
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl2",
    "translation": "Enraged Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowgirl! Use /distract to distract one and you can now use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Citizen",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You dont have any special commands during the night! Vote to remove people in the day! You might also get a chance to seeing someone doing an action!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.08,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "chief",
    "translation": "Chief Run with Moose",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are Chief Run with Moose. Settlers have taken your land! Kill them during the day to make sure they don't steal more of your land! ",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now using /kill [name] :",
    "killmsg": "A mysterious stranger rode into town! He stopped his steed as if he saw a ghost. His eyes sparkled with hate as he made his steed move faster than any human being or horse. He pulled a gun that was made of pure silver, he shot it and hit his target! ~Player~ has died! He rode out of town."
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "conspirator",
    "translation": "Town Crier",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town cryer! You can tell the truth or say a lie about someone's role! Use /daisy, /chief, /miller, /mafia boss, /mayor, /bar, /cowboy, /cowgirl or /expose to expose someone! You will be revealed when you expose, but you win with anyone so who cares! You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other night!",
    "info": "Can expose or fake-expose (as Cheif run with moos, cowboy, cowgirl, mayor, bartender, daisy duke or Mr. Johnson) one person during the standby. You can win with anyone if you survive.",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "expose": {
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can expose someone's role by typing /expose [name] (You won't be revealed!):",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells 'I have heard that ~Target~ is the ~Role~!'"
    },
    "Chief": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can also expose that person as a fake role by using /Chief , /bodyguard , /pl , /miller , /mayor , /bar , /daisy , or /mafiaboss:",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heared that ~Target~ is Chief Run with Moose!'"
    },
    "Daisy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Daisy Duke!!'"
    },
    "bar": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Bartender!'"
    },
    "mafiaboss": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Mr.Johnson!'"
    },
    "mayor": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Mayor!'"
    },
    "cowboy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowboy!'"
    },
    "cowgirl": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowgirl!!'"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "daisy",
    "translation": "DaisyDuke",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "",
    "info": "Can protect ONE person during the night. Can safeguard ONE person during the night. Sided with the Village.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 22,
    "broadcast": "none"
    },
    "safeguard": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "broadcast": "none"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sher",
    "translation": "sherrif",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You can use /stalk to find out what someone is doing!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stalk": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 31
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hero",
    "translation": "Heroofthewest",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a hero! You can use /kill to kill someone during the day!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "Kill a person during the day by using /kill name You will be revealed.",
    "killmsg": "A duel has begun! ~Self~ shoots first at ~Target~! ~Target~dies!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "vigi",
    "translation": "Vigilante",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a vigilante! You can use /kill to kill someone during the day!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "msg": "Use /kill name to kill someone now! You won't be revealed!",
    "killmsg": ""
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bar",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "side": "Seller",
    "help": "You are a bartender,you can use /give to give someone a poisoned drink!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "give": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 40,
    "broadcast": "none",
    "limit": 3,
    "count": 3,
    "command": "poison",
    "msg": "Your drink was poisoned, uh oh!"
    }
    },
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "villager"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "Out",
    "translation": "Outlaw",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are an outlaw! You can use /kill to kill someone during the night!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 11,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "distract": {
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "ind",
    "translation": "Indian",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "Use /arrow to kill someone with your beautiful arrows!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "arrow": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill",
    "msg": "Anarrowkilledyou!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss",
    "translation": "Mr.Johnson",
    "side": "jhonson",
    "help": "You can use /kill to kill anyone! You go through protect too!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 5,
    "limit": 1
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ChangeTarget",
    "hookermsg": "",
    "msg": ""
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "kill"
    ]
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bait",
    "translation": "Bait",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are bait!If someone tries to kill you then they will die with you!",
    "actions": {
    "kill": {
    "mode": "killattacker"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sneak",
    "translation": "Sneaky",
    "side": {
    "random": {
    "jhonson": 0.6,
    "mafia2": 0.4
    }
    },
    "help": "You can use /sneak to find out who someone visits, also you are sided on a random team!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tumble",
    "translation": "tumbleweed",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a little boy hiding in a tumbleweed! You have 0 votes, so you may want to go and connect the power roles!",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 0,
    "kill": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy",
    "translation": "Cowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowboy! It is your duty to /save someone! This means to protect. Good luck out there.",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowgirl": "cowgirl2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowgirl becomes enraged that the cowboy died!"
    },
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy2",
    "translation": "EnragedCowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowboy! You can use /save to save someone and now you can use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss2",
    "translation": "Bandit",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "Can kill one person per night (sharedwithteam) as well as one extra kill.. Use /steal to use this kill and you also evade hax and you have a 25% to not be killed at night!You may also use /sneak to find out who someone is visiting during the night!",
    "actions": {

    "night": {
    "steal": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Self",
    "command": "kill",
    "priority": 13,
    "msg": "The bandit stole all of your money!You were too poor to buy food and died of hunger!"
    },
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    },
    "kill": {
    "mode": {
    "evadeChance": 0.66
    }
    },
    "avoidHax": ["sneak"]
    }

    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "Out",
    "mafiaboss",
    "cowboy",
    "villager",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "villager",
    "villager"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "ind",
    "cowboy",
    "Out",
    "mayor",
    "villager",
    "mafiaboss2",
    "conspirator",
    "daisy",
    "bar",
    "hero",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "chief",
    "spy",
    "mafiaboss",
    "bait",
    "vigi",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "sneak",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "ind",
    "villager",
    "tumble"
    ],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "mayor",
    "conspirator"
    ],
    "border": "***A tumble weed goes across the field."
    }[/HIDE]
    Edited Code:
    {
    "name": "Wild West",
    "author": "<b><font color=pink>LadyHoliday</font></b>",
    "summary": "Howdy! You have traveled to the wild west. Its a duel of the Wild west, where The Cowboys are fighting the Outlaws and trying to keep the town safe, as the Indians strive to steal back and keep the Land! The bartender can with anyone, due to the fact that anyone will gladly give him enough money to bribe him into going to your side! Thanks to Black Mage for helping to spruce this theme up! ^^",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Indians",
    "winmsg": "The Indians, ~Players~, have won back the land, now you all have to leave this town!"
    },
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "village",
    "winmsg": "The village, ~Players~, have saved this town! Give them a yeehaw for what they have done!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Outlaws",
    "winmsg": "The Outlaws, ~Players~, have won! Now this is a robber town, better get out before anything happens!"
    },
    {
    "side": "Seller",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "winmsg": "The Bartender, ~Players~, have won! How did this happen though?"
    },
    {
    "side": "billy",
    "translation": "billy the kid",
    "winmsg": "Billy the Kid, ~Players~ , have won! Due to his mastermind plans, he has decided the whole town is a town of thievery!"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "mayor",
    "translation": "Mayor",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town mayor! You have four votes because you are the mayor of a small town! ",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 4
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "spy",
    "translation": "Witness",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Due to you not being able to sleep you walk around during the night to see if anything happens!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.3,
    "revealPlayer": 0.11
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl",
    "translation": "Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowgirl! Use /distract to make someone not able to use their command. If the cowboy dies you will turn into an enraged cowgirl!",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowboy": "cowboy2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowboy becomes enraged that the cowgirl died'"
    },
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl2",
    "translation": "Enraged Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowgirl! Use /distract to distract one and you can now use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Citizen",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You dont have any special commands during the night! Vote to remove people in the day! You might also get a chance to seeing someone doing an action!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.08,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "chief",
    "translation": "Chief Run with Moose",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are Chief Run with Moose. Settlers have taken your land! Kill them during the day to make sure they don't steal more of your land! ",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now using /kill [name] :",
    "killmsg": "A mysterious stranger rode into town! He stopped his steed as if he saw a ghost. His eyes sparkled with hate as he made his steed move faster than any human being or horse. He pulled a gun that was made of pure silver, he shot it and hit his target! ~Player~ has died! He rode out of town."
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "conspirator",
    "translation": "Town Crier",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town crier! You can tell the truth or say a lie about someone's role! Use /daisy, /chief, /miller, /mafia boss, /mayor, /bar, /cowboy, /cowgirl or /expose to expose someone every other day! You will be revealed when you expose, but you win with anyone so who cares! You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other night!",
    "info": "Can expose or fake-expose (as Chief run with moos, cowboy, cowgirl, mayor, bartender, daisy duke or Mr. Johnson) one person during the standby. You can win with anyone if you survive.",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "expose": {
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other day! (You will be revealed!):",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells 'I have heard that ~Target~ is the ~Role~!'"
    },
    "Chief": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can also expose that person every other day as a fake role by using /Chief , /bodyguard , /pl , /miller , /mayor , /bar , /daisy , or /mafiaboss:",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells 'I have heard that ~Target~ is Chief Run with Moose!'"
    },
    "Daisy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Daisy Duke!!'"
    },
    "bar": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Bartender!'"
    },
    "mafiaboss": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Billy the Kid!'"
    },
    "mayor": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Mayor!'"
    },
    "cowboy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowboy!'"
    },
    "cowgirl": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowgirl!!'"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "daisy",
    "translation": "Daisy Duke",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "",
    "info": "Can protect ONE person during the night. Can safeguard ONE person during the night. Sided with the Village.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 22,
    "broadcast": "none"
    },
    "safeguard": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "broadcast": "none"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sher",
    "translation": "sheriff",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You can use /stalk to find out what someone is doing!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stalk": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 31
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hero",
    "translation": "Hero of the west",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a hero! You can use /kill to kill someone during the day! You will be revealed when you kill during the day!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "Kill a person during the day by using /kill name You will be revealed!",
    "killmsg": "A duel has begun! ~Self~ shoots first at ~Target~! ~Target~dies!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bar",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "side": "Seller",
    "help": "You are a bartender,you can use /give to give someone a poisoned drink! Your poison takes 2 days to kill and you also inspect as a villager! ",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "give": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 40,
    "broadcast": "none",
    "limit": 3,
    "count": 3,
    "command": "poison",
    "msg": "Your drink was poisoned, uh oh!"
    }
    },
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "villager"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "Out",
    "translation": "Outlaw",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are an outlaw! You can use /kill to kill someone during the night!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 11,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "distract": {
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "ind",
    "translation": "Indian",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "Use /arrow to kill someone with your beautiful arrows!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "arrow": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill",
    "msg": "An arrow killed you!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss",
    "translation": "Billy the Kid",
    "side": "billy",
    "help": "You can use /kill to kill anyone! You go through protect too!",
    "actions": {
    "startup": {
    "team-revealif": [
    "billy",
    "mafia2"
    ]
    },
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 5,
    "limit": 1
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ChangeTarget",
    "hookermsg": "You have suffered the wraith of Billy the Kid!",
    "msg": "Someone tried to distract you during the night, but you killed them!"
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "kill"
    ]
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bait",
    "translation": "Bait",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are bait! If someone tries to kill you then they will die with you!",
    "actions": {
    "kill": {
    "mode": "killattacker"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sneak",
    "translation": "Sneaky",
    "side": {
    "random": {
    "billy": 0.6,
    "mafia2": 0.4
    }
    },
    "help": "You can use /sneak to find out who someone visits, also you are sided on a random team!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tumble",
    "translation": "tumbleweed kid",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a little boy hiding in a tumbleweed! You have 0 votes, so you may want to go and connect the power roles! You can evade nightkills, but you can't evade daykills so watch out!",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 0,
    "kill": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy",
    "translation": "Cowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowboy! It is your duty to /save someone! This means to protect. Good luck out there. If the cowgirl dies then you will turn into an enraged cowboy!",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowgirl": "cowgirl2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowgirl becomes enraged that the cowboy died!"
    },
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy2",
    "translation": "Enraged Cowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowboy! You can use /save to save someone and now you can use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss2",
    "translation": "Bandit",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "Can kill one person per night (shared with team) as well as one extra kill.. Use /steal to use this kill and you also evade hax and you have a 25% to not be killed at night!You may also use /sneak to find out who someone is visiting during the night!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "steal": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Self",
    "command": "kill",
    "priority": 13,
    "msg": "The bandit stole all of your money!You were too poor to buy food and died of hunger!"
    },
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    },
    "kill": {
    "mode": {
    "evadeChance": 0.66
    }
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "sneak"
    ]
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "Out",
    "mafiaboss",
    "cowboy",
    "villager",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "villager",
    "villager"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "ind",
    "cowboy",
    "Out",
    "mayor",
    "villager",
    "mafiaboss2",
    "conspirator",
    "daisy",
    "bar",
    "hero",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "chief",
    "spy",
    "mafiaboss",
    "bait",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "Out",
    "sneak",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "ind",
    "villager",
    "tumble"
    ],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "mayor"
    ],
    "border": "***A tumble weed goes across the field."
    }[/HIDE]
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    {
    "name": "Wild West",
    "author": "<b><font color=pink>LadyHoliday</font></b>",
    "summary": "Howdy! You have traveled to the wild west. Its a duel of the Wild west, where The Cowboys are fighting the Outlaws and trying to keep the town safe, as the Indians strive to steal back and keep the Land! The bartender can with anyone, due to the fact that anyone will gladly give him enough money to bribe him into going to your side! Thanks to Black Mage for helping to spruce this theme up! ^^",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Indians",
    "winmsg": "The Indians, ~Players~, have won back the land, now you all have to leave this town!"
    },
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "village",
    "winmsg": "The village, ~Players~, have saved this town! Give them a yeehaw for what they have done!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Outlaws",
    "winmsg": "The Outlaws, ~Players~, have won! Now this is a robber town, better get out before anything happens!"
    },
    {
    "side": "Seller",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "winmsg": "The Bartender, ~Players~, have won! How did this happen though?"
    },
    {
    "side": "billy",
    "translation": "billy the kid",
    "winmsg": "Billy the Kid, ~Players~ , have won! Due to his mastermind plans, he has decided the whole town is a town of thievery!"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "mayor",
    "translation": "Mayor",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town mayor! You have four votes because you are the mayor of a small town! ",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 4
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "spy",
    "translation": "Witness",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Due to you not being able to sleep you walk around during the night to see if anything happens!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.3,
    "revealPlayer": 0.11
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl",
    "translation": "Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowgirl! Use /distract to make someone not able to use their command. If the cowboy dies you will turn into an enraged cowgirl!",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowboy": "cowboy2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowboy becomes enraged that the cowgirl died'"
    },
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowgirl2",
    "translation": "Enraged Cowgirl",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowgirl! Use /distract to distract one and you can now use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Citizen",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You dont have any special commands during the night! Vote to remove people in the day! You might also get a chance to seeing someone doing an action!",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.08,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "chief",
    "translation": "Chief American Horse",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "You are Chief American Horse. Settlers have taken your land! Kill them during the day to make sure they don't steal more of your land! ",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now using /kill [name] :",
    "killmsg": "A mysterious stranger rode into town! He stopped his steed as if he saw a ghost. His eyes sparkled with hate as he made his steed move faster than any human being or horse. He pulled a gun that was made of pure silver, he shot it and hit his target! ~Target~ has died! He rode out of town."
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "conspirator",
    "translation": "Town Crier",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the town crier! You can tell the truth or say a lie about someone's role! Use /daisy, /chief, /miller, /mafia boss, /mayor, /bar, /cowboy, /cowgirl or /expose to expose someone every other day! You will be revealed when you expose, but you win with anyone so who cares! You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other night!",
    "info": "Can expose or fake-expose (as Chief American Horse, cowboy, cowgirl, mayor, bartender, daisy duke or Billy the Kid) one person during the standby. You can win with anyone if you survive.",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "expose": {
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other day! (You will be revealed!):",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells 'I have heard that ~Target~ is the ~Role~!'"
    },
    "Chief": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "msg": "You can also expose that person every other day as a fake role by using /Chief , /bodyguard , /pl , /miller , /mayor , /bar , /daisy , or /mafiaboss:",
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells 'I have heard that ~Target~ is Chief American Horse!'"
    },
    "Daisy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Daisy Duke!!'"
    },
    "bar": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Bartender!'"
    },
    "mafiaboss": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is Billy the Kid!'"
    },
    "mayor": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Mayor!'"
    },
    "cowboy": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowboy!'"
    },
    "cowgirl": {
    "command": "expose",
    "target": "Any",
    "recharge": 2,
    "exposemsg": "~Self~ yells'I have heard that ~Target~ is the Cowgirl!!'"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "daisy",
    "translation": "Daisy Duke",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "",
    "info": "Can protect ONE person during the night. Can safeguard ONE person during the night. Sided with the Village.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 22,
    "broadcast": "none"
    },
    "safeguard": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "broadcast": "none"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sher",
    "translation": "Sheriff Garrett",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You can use /stalk to find out what someone is doing!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stalk": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 31
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hero",
    "translation": "Annie Oakley",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a hero! You can use /kill to kill someone during the day! You will be revealed when you kill during the day!",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "Kill a person during the day by using /kill name You will be revealed!",
    "killmsg": "A duel has begun! ~Self~ shoots first at ~Target~! ~Target~dies!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bar",
    "translation": "Bartender",
    "side": "Seller",
    "help": "You are a bartender,you can use /give to give someone a poisoned drink! Your poison takes 2 days to kill and you also inspect as a villager! ",
    "winningSides": "*",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "give": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 40,
    "broadcast": "none",
    "limit": 3,
    "count": 3,
    "command": "poison",
    "msg": "Your drink was poisoned, uh oh!"
    }
    },
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "villager"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tom",
    "translation": "Tom Jones",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are Tom Jones part of the Wild Bunch!! You can use /kill to kill someone during the night! You and Bill also get hax on distract!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 11,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "distract": {
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bill",
    "translation": "Bill Doolin",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are Bill Doolin part of the Wild Bunch! You can use /kill to kill someone during the night! You and Tom Jones get hax on distract!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 11,
    "broadcast": "team"
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "distract": {
    "revealPlayer": 0.1
    }
    },
    "startup": "team-reveal"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "ind",
    "translation": "Geronimo",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "Use /arrow to kill someone with your beautiful arrows!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "arrow": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill",
    "msg": "An arrow killed you!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss",
    "translation": "Billy the Kid",
    "side": "billy",
    "help": "You can use /kill to kill anyone! You go through protect too! You may also steal someone to become a hostage using /steal!",
    "actions": {
    "startup": {
    "team-revealif": [
    "billy",
    "mafia2"
    ]
    },
    "night": {
    "steal": {
    "command": "convert",
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 4,
    "newRole": "hostage",
    "silent": false,
    "recharge": 2,
    "convertmsg": "A player has been taken hostage!"
    },
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 5,
    "limit": 1
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ChangeTarget",
    "hookermsg": "You have suffered the wraith of Billy the Kid!",
    "msg": "Someone tried to distract you during the night, but you killed them!"
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "kill"
    ]
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hostage",
    "translation": "Hostage",
    "side": "billy",
    "help": "You are the hostage of Billy the Kid! You can use /escape to try and get back to the good side!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "escape": {
    "command": "convert",
    "suicideChance": 0.5,
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 99,
    "newRole": "villager",
    "suicideMsg": "You tried to escape the clutch of Billy the Kid so you were killed!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bait",
    "translation": "Bait",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are bait! If someone tries to kill you then they will die with you!",
    "actions": {
    "kill": {
    "mode": "killattacker"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "sneak",
    "translation": "Sneaky",
    "side": {
    "random": {
    "billy": 0.6,
    "mafia2": 0.4
    }
    },
    "help": "You can use /sneak to find out who someone visits, also you are sided on a random team!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "tumble",
    "translation": "tumbleweed kid",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a little boy hiding in a tumbleweed! You have 0 votes, so you may want to go and connect the power roles! You can evade nightkills, but you can't evade daykills so watch out!",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 0,
    "kill": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy",
    "translation": "Cowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a cowboy! It is your duty to /save someone! This means to protect. Good luck out there. If the cowgirl dies then you will turn into an enraged cowboy!",
    "actions": {
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "cowgirl": "cowgirl2"
    },
    "convertmsg": "The cowgirl becomes enraged that the cowboy died!"
    },
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "cowboy2",
    "translation": "Enraged Cowboy",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are an enraged cowboy! You can use /save to save someone and now you can use /shoot to kill someone!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "save": {
    "command": "protect",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 5
    },
    "shoot": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "kill"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafiaboss2",
    "translation": "Jessie James",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "Can kill one person per night (shared with team) as well as one extra kill.. Use /steal to use this kill and you also evade hax and you have a 25% to not be killed at night!You may also use /sneak to find out who someone is visiting during the night!",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "steal": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Self",
    "command": "kill",
    "priority": 13,
    "msg": "Jessie James stole all of your money! You were too poor to buy food and died of hunger!"
    },
    "sneak": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 12,
    "broadcast": "team",
    "command": "stalk"
    }
    },
    "kill": {
    "mode": {
    "evadeChance": 0.66
    }
    },
    "avoidHax": [
    "sneak"
    ]
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "tom",
    "mafiaboss",
    "cowboy",
    "villager",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "bill",
    "villager",
    "villager"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "villager",
    "bill",
    "villager",
    "sher",
    "ind",
    "cowboy",
    "tom",
    "mayor",
    "villager",
    "mafiaboss2",
    "conspirator",
    "daisy",
    "bar",
    "hero",
    "cowgirl",
    "villager",
    "chief",
    "spy",
    "mafiaboss",
    "bait",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "sneak",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "ind",
    "villager",
    "tumble"
    ],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "mayor",
    "hero",
    "cowboy2",
    "cowgirl2"
    ],
    "border": "***A tumble weed goes across the field."
    }[/HIDE]
    Edits made:
    Added more specific descriptions in some roles to help make it easier. Fixed Sneaky so he will get team reveal. Also, added Billy the Kid in for Mr. Johnson. Made some grammar corrections and will continue fix these grammar problems! Fixed the Bandit's sneak so it can't be haxed, hopefully I did it right. :x Took out Vigilante to nerf the village, hopefully this nerfs it enough, if it doesn't I will continue to try and nerf it.
    I added some background information to the roles, they will become more detailed in the coming days! Made it so Bily the Kid can now take hostages![/HIDE]
    What needs to be fixed/added:
    Nerf the village a bit [if it needs it anymore or if I need to change nerfs] and possibly buff Billy the Kid up.[I don't think Billy the Kid really needs a buff since he may get Sneaky, but if it helps to even the sides than I will add that he gets +1 kill or a distract (Since he could probably make someone unable to do something during the night....)][/HIDE]
     
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  2. Li Q. Assir

    Li Q. Assir Mindblower

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    hi Lady! here are some issues I noticed:

    did you mean the inverse?

    cowgirl/boy's help message should say s/he transforms if cowboy/girl dies.

    Town Crier message should be: "You can expose/fake expose someone's role every other day!"

    You said on the description that the Bartender can with with anyone, but it is not on the codes. It should be said on the roles description too. It's not said that he inspects as villager. his description should also say that the poison takes 3 days to kill.

    Mr.Johnson's help should say he kills distractors and there should be a message at least for him if he is distracted

    Sneaky could have teamreveal. in cases he is sided with johnson, both of them wouldn't know each other.

    Bandit's both kills can be hax, not in accordance to his help message.

    "conspirator" shouldn't be a "villageCantLoseRoles"
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  3. Xinc

    Xinc Time for Oras?

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    I think to make the game a bit more specific, you should give names. Use history examples to give a more interesting feel, maybe? Like Billy the Kid, Apache Kid, etc?
     
  4. LadyHoliday

    LadyHoliday ♥Joyful Soul♥

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    Okay, I added what was needed in the role's descriptions and fixed the team reveal thing. I will fix the Bandit's avoid hax in a little bit. [Fixed]

    I was thinking this would be a general take on the Wild West, but I did put Billy the Kid as a Mafia Boss. I might actually put in historic examples of outlaws since they were a bit more known. :x
     
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  5. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    Should add that hero reveals in the desc. Also is tumbleweed kid supposed to be like an Aerith role?
     
  6. two sides of one coin

    two sides of one coin sick of all her shit

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    I think that Village is horribly, horribly OP. They need a serious nerf.
    Sheriff has double f's not r's :P
    I also think Billy needs a slight buff - Mayor or PL killer, perhaps?
     
  7. LadyHoliday

    LadyHoliday ♥Joyful Soul♥

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    I added that hero reveals in their description. Yes, tumbleweed kid is supposed to be like an Aerith role.
    I will put into thought of how to nerf the village and how to buff Billy up. [Fixed]
    Also, thanks for pointing out that I misspelled sheriff! :)

    Note: I don't think Billy the Kid really needs a buff since he may get Sneaky some of the time. If I need to buff actually buff him up to make the sides even I will give him another kill or a distract.
     
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  8. Scatterbrain

    Scatterbrain You only live once*

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    *a tumbleweed voluntarily bumps this thread*
    Town criers codename is consp
    Minor grammar issues
    Vigilante's Daykill message is blank
    Tumbleweed should win with any side, seeing as he's an inanimate object
    Bartender isn't told he can poison 3 times and each poison lasts 2 days (not 3, 2)
    You should give some backstory in some of the roles (whos Mr. Johnson? What are Indians doing in this theme? Etc. )
    Some titles and words are clumped together like Hero of the west or something like that
    Besides that, Good job. I would like to see this theme become played
     
  9. LadyHoliday

    LadyHoliday ♥Joyful Soul♥

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    I'm kind of confused on what you mean by "Town criers code name is consp", does that mean I should change it or is it fine to keep it as is?
    I fixed the grammar errors, but not all of them yet! Also, the tumbleweed is actually a kid, so he will only be sided with the village.
    Also, thank you! :) <3
     
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  10. Oh So Shoddy

    Oh So Shoddy Devil's Advocate

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    I think this theme could be a lot more enticing if you incorporated specific characters from any particularly wild west story. Then the roles at least wouldn't seem too generic. The 'flavor' of the theme is usually what sets it apart since there's only so much you can do otherwise. I won't Say what particular setting to use, I'll leave that up to you. But I think it would greatly help the initial attraction.
     
  11. Dark Phoenix

    Dark Phoenix Multidimensional Hero

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    Hi Lady! Ok so going off of what other QC have said I want to reiterate that this theme's generality is what it's biggest downfall atm. I think if you honed in specifically on the "wild west" and made it easier to associate it (with pronouns); as I've always felt if you just see a regular noun it has the feel and generality of how a reskin used to be classified.

    like instead of just "Sheriff" why not have "Sheriff Garrett" (the sheriff known for killing billy the kid) in the theme? It would be incredibly cool if [following t3's suit ALMOST] if you took people of that era [1800s] and model'd the wild west theme from prominent figures of that day


    ie: One mafia could be the Wild Bunch (Butch Cassidy Mike Cassidy Sundance kid etc;)
    Billy the Kid lone role is fine
    There's so much you can do with this theme that would really make it spectacular....
     
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  12. LadyHoliday

    LadyHoliday ♥Joyful Soul♥

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    I changed all of the bad guys names to historic outlaws and for some of the roles on the good side I can't really find people who suit those roles very well, but I am still looking!
    Also, Dark Phoenix I used your Sheriff Garrett idea if that is okay with you. :)
    Thank you all! ^^ <3
     
  13. t3 the third

    t3 the third Member

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    I'm going to comment on the flavour. Most of the time, in this kind of theme based on reality, the flavour can either be a generality of the possible kinds of people you'd meet (like default or your original flavour), people that have existed (History) or a mix of the two, which is what Dark Phoenix just proposed. While we, in Mafia QC, generally disregard flavour until the code and balance is settled, it still is very important to keep the players' interest.
    I'm just going to point out that Bonnie and Clyde weren't outlaws from the Wild West but from the Sandy South. Also Bonnie and Clyde lived during the Great Depression which is probably the reason why they robbed banks.
    Jesse James doesn't have the code for the shared kill and I don't see how /steal can kill immediately but that's minor. The main problem with the role is having too much on one role. Bonnie and Clyde seem left out here. And no theme maker wants a role to feel left out or be useless. Diversify mafia1 and you probably could do the same for mafia2 although that isn't necessary for the Injuns.

    This theme has too much potential to be outright declined, just putting that out there.
     
  14. Dark Phoenix

    Dark Phoenix Multidimensional Hero

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    Here are some examples of people you can use for the different mafias IMO..


    Mafia1
    Nicolas Bravo
    Antonio Lopez de Santa Anna
    Anastasio Bustamante
    Ignacio José de Allende y Unzaga

    Now for this side it would obviously be the attackers from Mexico - trying to reclaim the land as they were at the time trying to evade their spanish rulers (or revolt against them) - they saw that the AmerIndians were about to revolt so they decided in the state of confusion - they too would join the battle! etc; something like that.


    Mafia2
    Chief Goyaaté (Geronimo)
    Chief Joseph (Nez Percé)
    Chief Tecumseh
    Chief American Horse
    Chief Manuelito

    Now this is the AmerIndian side. Now - some of these chiefs aren't from the same tribe however, you can just briefly say that they were "tired" of sharing the land and wanted to reclaim it all for yourself despite your usual peace governed nature! I would recommend having at least 3 for each mafia as this is almost a precedent and to sway from it is "almost" un-heard of.

    I hope that helps!
     
  15. Zzyzx Road

    Zzyzx Road Member

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    I just think there's nothing outstanding here. You could try and shake the roles a bit to open new possibilities, as it looks just like a modified version of FF now.
     
  16. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    I am not sure how your border is going to play out. Also, you said you would update this 17 days ago. What happened to that?

    I feel like this is FF mixed with Weapons. I am not sure which one came first but the town crier is a lot like the Pen. I would really like to see more variety in the roles. I don't really like the thought of the villagers getting hax. That is done a lot and I feel like it is over done. I understand that you don't want people to complain about any role they get but villager is a huge part in any mafia game.

    Bandit says it shares a kill but that kill isn't coded into that role. Why does Billy the Kid have team-revealif when he can only be on one side?

    Villagecantloseroles needs Hero, Enraged Cowboy, and Enraged Cowgirl.
     
  17. LadyHoliday

    LadyHoliday ♥Joyful Soul♥

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    Sorry, I haven't been able to update this for so long life was getting busy. I'm going to update it tonight and hopefully, make it less like FF. :)
    New idea to be added: Bandit steals villagers and converts them into hostages. Villagers can try and convert them back, only once in the game.
    Edit: Billy the Kid now will take Hostages. Also, I put your idea in BeastCharizard, I loved that more than my fail chance escape thing idea. :p
    Also, thank you for the command script! :) <3
     
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  18. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    When they are hostages give them a command that converts them back to villagers but has a high suicide chance.
    "escape": {
    "command": "convert",
    "suicideChance": 0.5,
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "priority": 99,
    "newRole": "villager",
    "suicideMsg": "You tried to escape but got caught and were killed."
    }
    [/HIDE]
     
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