Xenosaga (Putting up here for Review)

Discussion in 'Review' started by HolyTorterra, Sep 12, 2012.

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  1. HolyTorterra

    HolyTorterra New Member

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    http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=r8SpCWeR

    Summary: Xenosaga is a series of space-adventure RPGs that has a lot of interesting characters and a story of conciousness and powers that would be perfect for expanding on in a Mafia game. As for the game's official summary, that's coded into the themes. Shion is Insp, Kosmos is Vigi, Ziggy is BG, Momo is Mayor, chaos is Spy, Jr. is Samurai, Allen knows Shion, Realians are villagers, and Jin is PL.

    Sides:

    -Heroes: Realian, Shion, Kosmos, VX-10000, Ziggy, MOMO, chaos, Jr., Allen, Jin
    -U-Tic: U-TIC Soldier, Andrew, Margulis
    -Gnosis: Cerberus, Orge, Wizard, Sophie Peithos
    -Albedo: Albedo, Realian 100
    -Zohar: Zohar
    -U-DO: U-DO, Song of Nephilim
     
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  2. NAVIDAD PIRATE

    NAVIDAD PIRATE THE PLEASURE OF BEING CUMMED INSIDE

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    Hi HolyTorterra, a description of the theme and a summary of the sides and roles would be pretty helpful if you want reviews.
     
  3. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    Personally, I hate mecha anything. That being said i do like the theme. I read over it before it was posted here so i know a good bit about it. The code seems to check out which is good. About a third of your roles are good which might give them a little more of an advantage then need be. The converter is a good role in my opinion. I think you should space out your villagers a little bit more when they are being added to the game. That is about all i can think of right now.

    I like your theme though. :)
     
  4. HolyTorterra

    HolyTorterra New Member

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    Thanks for the review. I see the goodness of the roles, but it's spread out to create a balance, and each one has a counter. Also, the roles list is semi-randomized everytime the theme is loaded so I don't think the spacing matters.
     
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    Beast I do what I want

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    I just remembered that the author of this theme says Hellfire Bowsa. I would also put your forum name HolyTorterra on there as well. It is an easy fix ["Hellfire Bowsa", "HolyTorterra"]
    Just replace the Hellfire Bowsa part with the [] part. I thought of that last night while trying to fall asleep and it has been bothering me ever sense.

    It would be nice if you could kind of describe what each role does that way someone doesn't have to read through all of your code to find out what everyone does.

    I am sorry that no one besides me has commented on your theme yet. Good luck with everything.
     
  6. Zzyzx Road

    Zzyzx Road Member

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    bump, so you don't forget to fix the head post.
     
  7. Oh So Shoddy

    Oh So Shoddy Devil's Advocate

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    No significant update has been made to this thread, therefore requesting this be locked. There's now a critiquing forum where you can post your ideas and receive any help needed if you ever decide to try again.
     
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