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    {
    "name": "Space",
    "summary": "The Universe is so big and the Solar System is in danger from supernova’s, other stars, other galaxies, black holes and collisions from other planets. The Solar System needs to protect itself from such devastating disasters and save mankind. Credits to KX with suggestions. Anymore suggestions, PM Mr.Anonymous. To the mafia admins – more roles will be added later (If needed), but for now, I just want feedback to see what I should change and stuff.",
    "author": "Mr.Anonymous",
    "sides": [
    { "side": "village", "translation": "Solar System"
    },
    { "side": "stars", "translation": "Stars"
    },
    { "side": "black", "translation": "Black Hole"
    },
    { "side": "galaxy", "translation": "Galaxies"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [{
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Asteroid",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "A piece of rock that flies around space, you really don’t serve any purpose other than colliding with planets.",
    "actions": {}
    }, {
    "role": "inspector",
    "translation": "Earth",
    "info": "Can inspect (/observe) one person during the night. Has an 85% chance of evading daykills. Vote counts as 3. Sided with Solar System.",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "The only place in the universe known to support life. Technology has advanced so much that you have placed objects like the Hubble Space Telescope into space that can see into the far reaches of the universe. To observe (Inspect) someone during the night, type /observe (Name). Because Jupiter protects you from many collisions, you have an 85% chance of evading daykills. You also have an extra vote of 3. Because I said so. You know the Moon, and the Moon knows you.",
    "actions": { "night": {"observe": {"command": "inspect", "target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Role", "priority": 30 } },
    "vote": 3,
    "daykill": {"mode": { "evadeChance": 0.85 } },
    "startup": {"revealRole": "voice"}}

    }, {
    "role": "bodyguard",
    "translation": "Jupiter",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the largest planet in the Solar System, your gravitational field is much stronger than Earth’s that over millions of years, you have stopped comets, space debris and other rocks from colliding with Earth. It is your job to /protect Earth from being collided with by Space rocks.",
    "actions": { "night": {"protect": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Role", "priority":2, "broadcast": "role"} },
    "startup": "role-reveal"}
    }, {
    "role": "betelgeuse",
    "translation": "Betelgeuse",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "Betelgeuse is one of the largest known stars. It will explode within the next few million years and when it does, it will leave behind a giant supernova which would potentially /kill millions of people if its radiations were exposed to Earth. To kill someone during the night type /kill. You can become a red hypergiant, by typing /hypergiant (Your name), If you choose to do this however, you have a 1 time kill and you will be so large that you will alter the orbits of any objects. BUT if you decide to convert, you need to wait 3 nights before you can do any action. ",
    "actions": { "night": {"kill": {"target": "AnyButTeam", "common": "Self", "priority": 11 },
    "hypergiant": { "command": "convert","target": "OnlySelf", "common":"Self", "priority": 1,"newRole": "betelgeuse1", "canConvert": ["betelgeuse" ], "silent": true } },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "betelgeuse1",
    "translation": "Betelgeuse",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "You are now a red hypergiant. You will explode very soon. Because you are so large, you can alter the orbit of any object and thus they will be disintergrated if they collide with you. You have a ONE TIME /kill that you can use at any time in the game.",
    "actions": { "night": {"kill": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 99,"recharge": 999} },
    "daykill": "revenge","daykillrevengemsg": "~Target~ tried to kill (~Role~) but ~Target~ collided with ~Role~ and disintergrated!",
    "kill": { "mode": "killattacker"},
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}

    }, {
    "role": "hooker",
    "translation": "Venus",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Named after the Roman Goddess of Love and Beauty. You are the most beautiful object in the night sky and people who see you will often be amazed at your beauty. To stop someone from doing things during the night type /shine (Distract) to shine your beauty and stop people from doing things during the night.",
    "actions": { "night": {"shine": {"command": "distract", "target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 1 } } }
    }, {
    "role": "spy",
    "translation": "Voyager 1",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the furthest object from Earth in the Solar System. You are constantly sending back data to Earth, However it takes you 8 hours to send signals to Earth and they don’t all reach Earth, however some do. Use this data to help protect the Solar System. You know who Voyager 2 is, and Voyager 2 knows who you are.",
    "actions": { "hax": {"kill": { "revealTeam": 0.4, "revealPlayer": 0.2} },
    "startup": {"revealRole": "stalker"}}
    }, {
    "role": "stalker",
    "translation": "Voyager 2",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You and your twin sister spacecraft (Voyager 1) are the furthest objects in the Solar System. You also send back data to Earth to protect the Solar System, however, since some of your functions have ceased working, the only thing you can do is /view (stalk) someone to see who they visited during the night. Remember to report this information back to Earth. You know who Voyager 1 is and Voyager 1 knows who you are.",
    "actions": { "night": {"stalk": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 20} },
    "startup": {"revealRole": "spy"}}
    }, {
    "role": "voice",
    "translation": "Moon",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "The only natural satellite of Earth, you change the tides of Earth’s oceans and Earth’s gravity keeps you locked into its orbit. Often there will be times when asteroids collide into you so that they miss Earth. Your job is to protect the Earth from being invaded with Asteroids, comets etc. You know who Earth is and Earth knows who you are. It is your job to voice the Inspector. You can’t be daykilled.",
    "actions": {"startup": {"revealRole": "inspector"},
    "daykill": "evade"}
    }, {
    "role": "vigilante",
    "translation": "Mercury",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the smallest planet in the Solar System, and also the closest planet to the Sun, the Sun’s gravity is so strong that whatever comes into your orbit gets sucked in by the Sun. To send objects away from your orbit type /deorbit to deorbit (kill) the object from your orbit and send it straight into the Sun.",
    "actions": { "night": {"deorbit": {"command": "kill", "target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 15 } } }
    }, {
    "role": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Andromeda Galaxy",
    "side": "galaxy",
    "help": "You are about twice the size of the Milky Way Galaxy. It is predicted that in about 3 ~ 5 billion years time, that you will collide with the Milky Way to form a new giant elliptical galaxy. To collide (kill) with the Milky Way Galaxy type /collide (Targets name). YOUR KILL IS SHARED WITH THE OTHER GALAXIES!",
    "actions": { "night": {"kill": {"target": "AnyButTeam", "common": "Team", "priority": 16, "broadcast": "team", "broadcastmsg": "±Game: ~Player~, the Andromeda Galaxy, wants to collide with ~Target~!"} },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "poisoner",
    "translation": "Mars",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Your toxic atmosphere is deadly to anyone who inhales air on your surface. You are also known as the Red planet due to the massive amounts of Carbon Dioxide. Your poison takes 2 nights to kill someone. Type /poison (Name) two times to poison two people.",
    "actions": { "night": {"poison": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 14, "count": 2} } }
    }, {
    "role": "conspirator2",
    "translation": "Triangulum Galaxy",
    "side": "galaxy",
    "help": "Third largest galaxy in the Local Group, you have the potential to cause devastation to anything that gets in your path, because of this, you can /reflect (Kill) several objects (2) (YOUR KILLS ARE NOT SHARED WITH THE OTHER GALAXIES). After this, you can’t use the action for another 3 nights.",
    "actions": { "night": {"reflect": {"command": "kill", "target": "AnyButTeam", "common": "Team", "priority": 17, "limit" :2 ,"recharge": 3} },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "mafiaboss1",
    "translation": "IC 1101",
    "side": "galaxy",
    "help": "You are the largest galaxy found to date. You are large enough that you can change the course (/protect) of several space objects and protect other galaxies from colliding with you. Nothing can stop you. (You can’t be distracted)",
    "actions": { "night": {"protect": {"target": "Self", "common": "Self", "priority": 2 } },
    "distract": {"mode": "ignore"},
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "mafiaboss2",
    "translation": "Sagittarius A*",
    "side": "black",
    "help": "You are a supermassive black hole at the centre of the Milky Way, Nothing can escape, not even light. You bend time (Kill during the day, YOU won’t be revealed) and whatever touches you gets sucked in.",
    "actions": { "standby": {"bend": {"command": "kill", "target": "AnyButSelf", "msg": "You can now /bend one person. Type /bend [Name]",
    "killmsg": "~Target~ was sucked in by the supermassive black hole. ~Target~ can no longer escape.!"} },
    "daykill": "bomb","daykillrevengemsg": "~Target~ got too close to ~Self~, ~Target~ fell into the event horizon and cannot escape.",
    "kill": { "mode": "killattacker"}}
    }, {
    "role": "samurai",
    "translation": "Saturn",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "Named after the Roman God Saturn. AKA, the Father of Jupiter. You are the second largest planet in the Solar System, There are times you can be hit with space debris or other large objects that could cause devastating effects. You have a 30% chance of evading nightkills. You can disintergrate other objects during the standby phase, by doing /disintergrate. YOU WILL BE REVEALED.",
    "actions": { "standby": {"disintergrate": {"command": "kill", "target": "AnyButSelf", "msg": "You can now /disintergrate one person. Type /disintergrate [Name]",
    "killmsg": "~Target~ tried to collide with ~Self~ (~Role~), but ~Self~ (~Role~) being a gas giant, ~Target~ disintergrated before reaching the surface.!"} },
    "kill": {"mode": { "evadeChance": 0.3}}}
    }, {
    "role": "vycanis",
    "translation": "VY Canis Majoris",
    "info": "Can become a hypernova during the night (/explode). Can become a blackhole during the night (/explode1). Sided with Stars.",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "You are the largest star found to date. With a radius of 2200 Solar radii’s your extremely powerful gravitational field allows you to reflect objects from your neighbourhood, however, because you are so big and nearing the end of your life, you will explode in about 10,000 years and leave behind a hypernova or a blackhole, depending on the circumstances. To become a hypernova type /explode or to become blackhole type /explode1. ",
    "actions": {"night": { "explode": { "command": "convert","target": "OnlySelf", "common":"Self", "priority": 1,"newRole": "hypernova", "canConvert": ["vycanis" ], "silent": true },
    "explode1": { "command": "convert","target": "OnlySelf", "common":"Self", "priority": 1,"newRole": "blackhole1", "canConvert": ["vycanis" ], "silent": true } },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "hypernova",
    "translation": "VY Canis Majoris Hypernova",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "You are the leftover remnant of VY Canis Majoris, Your gamma ray bursts are so strong that you could potentially wipe out all life on Earth, however, you are too far away to do any damage. Since you are so big however, you can protect your local neighbourhood from collisions with other objects, by typing /protect (name). As a bonus, you can protect 3 people.",
    "actions": { "night": {"protect": {"target": "Self", "common": "Self", "priority": 2, "limit": 3 } },
    "distract": {"mode": "ignore"},
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "blackhole1",
    "translation": "VY Canis Majoris Black Hole Remnant",
    "info": "Can poison unlimited amounts of people during the night (Takes 5 turns to activate)",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "You are the Black Hole remnant of VY Canis Majoris the largest star found to date in the universe. You suck in everything in your path and they cannot escape, and they will eventually destroyed. However, this takes a few million years. (You can poison unlimited amounts of people, but their poison will take 5 turns to activate)",
    "actions": { "night": {"poison": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 99, "limit": 99, "count": 5} },
    "startup": "team-reveal-with-roles"}
    }, {
    "role": "spy2",
    "translation": "Sun (Sol)",
    "side": "village",
    "info": "Can kill one person during the night. Get’s hax on protect.",
    "help": "You are the Sun, the largest object in the Solar System, your size is big enough to keep 8 planets, over 200 moons and countless other objects in orbit with your enormous gravity, however, when objects collide with you, they are instantly disintergrated. Use /kill (disintergrate) to kill one person during the night. You may also sometimes get hax on protectors.",
    "actions": { "night": {"kill": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 3} },
    "hax": {"protect": { "revealTeam": 0.4, "revealPlayer": 0.2} } }
    }, {
    "role": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Sirius",
    "side": "stars",
    "help": "Sirius is one of the brightest objects in the sky, however, it is a binary star system, meaning the smaller star orbits the bigger star, the bigger star is thus the more important one. Use /kill to kill one person during the night.",
    "actions": { "night": {"kill": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 97} } }
    }, {
    "role": "exposer",
    "translation": "New Horizons",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a spacecraft that is currently en-route to the dwarf planet Pluto, along the way you occasionally receive data that you send back to Earth. You can /expose one person during the day. If you are killed, your killer will be revealed.",
    "actions": { "standby": {"expose": {"target": "AnyButSelf","msg": "You can type /expose [name] to reveal someone's role!","exposemsg": "~Self~ (~Role~) received and interstellar message telling them that ~Target~ is ~Role~"} },
    "daykill": "revealkiller", "daykillrevengemsg": "~Target~ collided with ~Self~ and shatters to a million pieces, Earth receives a signal that ~Target~ is ~Role~."}

    }, {
    "role": "safeguarder",
    "translation": "Uranus",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are titled 97° on your side., you are the third largest planet in the Solar System and forth most massive, you often protect the smaller planets from collisions by big objects you are a gas giant comprising mostly of hydrogen and helium. Protect other planets from dying by poison by doing /safeguard. You can safeguard 2 people (Would be best if you safeguarded either Earth, Moon or Jupiter)",
    "actions": { "night": {"safeguard": {"target": "AnyButSelf", "common": "Self", "priority": 1, "limit" : 1} } }
    }, {
    "role": "miller",
    "translation": "Neptune",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are the farthest object from the Sun in the Solar System, every 98 ~ 100 years, Pluto comes closer to the Sun than you do and therefore you will be seen as a TNO (Trans-Neptunian Object).",
    "actions": { "inspect": {"revealAs": ["mafia1", "blackhole1", "hypernova", "vycanis", "mafiaboss2" , "mafiaboss1" , "mafia2" , "mafiaboss2", "betelgeuse"]} }


    }],

    "roles1": ["bodyguard", "mafia1", "inspector", "spy2", "hooker", "villager", "mafia1",
    "villager", "villager", "villager"],

    "roles2": ["bodyguard", "spy2", "mafia1", "inspector", "hooker", "villager", "mafia2",
    "mafia2", "stalker", "villager", "villager", "villager", "villager", "spy", "safeguarder",
    "villager", "miller", "mafiaboss1", "vycanis", "vigilante", "voice", "betelgeuse",
    "mafiaboss2", "samurai", "conspirator2", "exposer", "spy2", "mafia1",
    "poisoner", "bodyguard", "villager", "villager"],
    "villageCantLoseRoles": ["inspector", "vigilante", "samurai"],
    "killmsg": "±Universe: ~Player~ (~Role~) was ejected from the Universe",
    "killusermsg": "You were ejected from the Universe."

    }

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    1. I'm only submitting this, not necessarily to get it accepted, more for the fact I want feedback on what I should change and stuff.
    2. I want to add Uranus and Neptune to the Solar Systems side, but I don't know what they could possibly do.
    3. I've tried my best to relate the roles to real life. (Venus being the PL, Jupiter being the BG, etc etc.)
    4. I would like to add Pluto to the theme, but then I would need to add another side. I need your suggestions, Should I add another side "Dwarf Planets" ?


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    Solar System Side.

    Basically the Asteroids are the Villagers who are identical to Villagers in default.

    Jupiter is the BG.

    Earth is the Inspector that has an 85% chance of evading daykills (Because Jupiter's gravity usually sends Asteroids colliding with the planet, so I tried to relate it to that) and being the only place where life exists, I thought it would kind of make sense to give it 3 votes. Earth also knows who the Moon is and vice versa. (The Moon being the Inspector's voice, this is useful so that Earth doesn't need to PM anyone except the Moon and the other PR's when he gets them). The Moon also evades daykills.

    Venus is the Hooker

    Voyager 1 and Voyager 2 are Spy and Stalker who know each other. (Voyager 1, because it's the furthest man made object in the Solar System, it can send data back to Earth about the far reaches of the universe, similarly with Voyager 2, but instead of getting hax on other people, Voyager 2 gets to stalk a person)

    Mercury is the Vigilante (Because it's so close to the Sun, the Sun usually affects objects that orbit around Mercury so they usually collide with the Sun)

    Mars is the poisoner (Because of the Carbon Dioxide on its surface, was the only role that would make sense being the poisoner)

    New Horizons is an exposer.

    Saturn is the Samurai sided with the Solar System that gets a 30% chance of evading nightkills.

    The Sun is a killer that gets 40% chance of reveal on people who protect.

    Galaxies Side.

    Andromeda Galaxy can kill someone during the night, Triangulum Galaxy can kill 2 people every 3 nights (NOT SHARED WITH ANDROMEDA), IC 1101 (The largest galaxy ever found) can protect 2 people (Usually Triangulum Galaxy)

    Black Hole Side

    Sagittarius A* is a daykiller (THAT DOESN'T get revealed) that is also a day and night bomb.

    Stars Side

    VY Canis Majoris can either become VY Canis Majoris Black Hole Remnant (Who can poison an unlimited amount of people, but the poison taking 5 nights to activate) or VY Canis Majoris Hypernova (Who can protect 3 people during the night and also can't be distracted)


    Sirius is a basic killer


    Betelgeuse is a role that can either kill or convert to a hypergiant (Also named Betelgeuse)
    Hypergiant Betelgeuse is a night and day bomb that gets a one time kill.

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    Suggestions/Criticism/Comments are welcome!
     
    Last edited: Sep 14, 2012
  2. Mr.Anonymous

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    Bumping this thread because I feel that it's gone unnoticed.
     
  3. Li Q. Assir

    Li Q. Assir Mindblower

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    Can we do it?? brb bumping mine too...
     
  4. Beast

    Beast I do what I want

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    The way that you organize your code made it really hard for me to read. I know everyone has their own way of coding though.

    For Neptune maybe you could make the planet a safeguarder since you do not have one in your theme.

    Also, i feel like a lot of themes are being over looked.
     
  5. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    Why should Betelgeuse convert into a red giant? Before converting it can can kill more then once, but upon converting it can kill only once and becomes a bomb. It just seems to me that the cons outweigh the pros.
     
  6. Mr.Anonymous

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    Betelgeuse normal can only kill 1 person per night, I guess it's just about whether or not people prefer to kill or stay alive.
     
    Last edited: Sep 13, 2012
  7. chippymunk

    chippymunk Bran-ed

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    I don't know why but I would LOVE to see Pluto in this theme. Perhaps a role like Youngster Joey in the Trainer theme. (I think it's trainer anyway).
     
  8. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    @mr. Anonymous Then why does the revenge daykilling message reveal who is Betelgeuse? If that happens, the person will just be lynched anyway.
     
  9. Li Q. Assir

    Li Q. Assir Mindblower

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    Why don't make Pluto as Plutonium (elements), working alone?
     
  10. Xinc

    Xinc Time for Oras?

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    I like that idea as well.

    Also, needs Orion on stars side.
     
  11. Mr.Anonymous

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    What will Orion do ?

    I already have a role similar to that, Sagittarius A*

    It's not meant to be like that, I should fix that.
     
  12. Mr.Anonymous

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    Added a Safeguarder (Uranus) and a Miller (Neptune).
     
  13. Altaria

    Altaria (':

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    Could you trim the role desc? I could help. It gives me the tl;dr and OCD.
     
  14. SteelEdges

    SteelEdges The Poll Dancer

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    "1. I'm only submitting this, not necessarily to get it accepted, more for the fact I want feedback on what I should change and stuff."

    This is not the purpose of Mafia Review.

    Locking.
     
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